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Elementality 04-17-05 03:51 AM

The Secret Language of Ordinary Objects
 
You might say that when you walk into
your house one day that the lights that were
flashing on and off were just mere coincidence
That when your door bell rings at 5 a.m
and theirs no one outside, it’s only bad circuiting
Or when the volume on your computer, on your t.v.
or on your stereo just fluctuate because of the
uneven dispersion of electricity

Some might say that all the objects in your
household have a secret language that you can't
hear, and they're all just playing tricks on you

But I say they're just trying to be noticed.
Or maybe they just want you to see that just
because you don’t see them moving,breathing,
making, saying, or thinking.......doesn't necessarily
mean that they aren't. That they aren’t just as important as
you or i

That they are just doing their job in life like we

we: are created into this life, then are sculpted into utensils
in order to make this earth go round and round every day. Until
there is no use for us anymore

we: are all just ordinary everyday objects.

Germ 04-17-05 12:55 PM

dope....liked the concept, not as much emotion as some of your other pieces though....but still had a strong message and makes you ponder....good job man....keep up....../join my crew :)

Bangalore 04-17-05 01:58 PM

i liked this your style here was like mine dope drop ...nice imagery....do you listen to songs while writing?

Elementality 04-17-05 02:47 PM

Not for this peice. On this occasion I was on mushrooms, and my whole trip revolved around a bunch of different experiences with different common objects....it seemed like they were living, and trying to show me something... I realized this earlier on, but not in such a bright light as I did on this trip.

But yea, for the most part i listen to music while I write....usually music without any words.

MC IgGY 04-17-05 04:28 PM

i really liked this drop. da idea was great, good job

Sweft 04-17-05 04:55 PM

hey now! I hate it when ppl speek for me! UGH! lol, yeah man, great drop!
check out my work and leave me some feed-back!
Sweft

Spektikul 04-19-05 02:41 AM

This piece was so original.

Have yet to see anything like it.

I thought it made a hard impact in the sense of your diction, and just how you worded it.

Great formatting as well. I just feel this was such a clever verse, really makes you think about it. Great job, cant wait to peep your next poetic script...:thumbup:

N.Tavarez 04-19-05 12:47 PM

dope as shit
original concept to this one
make the sequel
when ordinary objects attack: they're just lonely...


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