Madness and tears
 

yall sleep too much!!!

this piece looked at tho it had some deepness to it...basic flow structure tho...keep workin on it..much luv..God bless..1..

this kinda has the same mood as my peice 'corruptions to dessperation' and since i just finished writting the peice, i really feel this. the mood has a perfect setting. your wordplay and imagey really got your opnion out. short but top notch stuff.
stay up, joey

that was a nice spit ...a little basicbut had a strong message.....

where the hell is berthoud at???????im used to live in brighton westminster and denver....

thanx for tha replies ya i rusehed this one a lil bit i drop one that i actually take time on n a lil bit.....^^^^berthoud is up by fort collins,loveland and greely area if u know where those towns are....peaz 1

i like dat spit dawg.....it was tight...it made you actually pictured everything you said in da rhyme....