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K!ng-Y@Yo vs Verbal
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8-10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 04-17-05 at 10:05 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Verbal has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-17-05 09:36 PM.
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K!ng-Y@Yo has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-17-05 09:37 PM.
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I'm the lord in all accord, you're just an upstart vassal
You're left humbled and crumbled as the king of a sand castle Cokehead's sniffing my lines, and getting my hooks up his nose I could inspire this illiterate idiot to write books on my flows Your lines resemble crippled snails, so it's pretty fitting That I leave slugs in your chest for slow-mo spitting You're a free agent for a reason, just check the statistics You couldn't even be the MVP of the Special Olympics "Verbal is your savior, lord and master" just repeat the refrain I should slit verbal in your wrists so you could say my name in vein |
Dis is my first battle for like 2 months so here it is...... I'm jus warming up kid and i'm already on fire, Fuck verbal dis is physical abuse through a wire I can see it now dat i still got da talent dat it takes, 1/2 way threw my verse my lines already got u half baked Dis noob comin at Yayo wit a name like "Verbal", Name like dat i should have known u was herbal But fo real dawg dont take dis KO offensively, Dis shit gonna go down as da worst merkin in history Goodluck dawg......~1~ |
Same to you, thanks for bringing a quick spit.
Let's get some votes. |
No problem for da quick spit....i hate it when somebody takes da hole 3 days to prewrite there shit......dis might be a close battle but i think u got me i aint battled in 2 months....but its all good....~1~ UPPIN FOR HONEST EXPLAINED VOTES PLEASE!!!!!
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Voted For: Verbal
eeeee yeah....all the way one sided king yayo...your stuff was too basic, not really any hard, creative punches in there....and last line was totally self-glorifying and not directed at verbal at all, and basically it contradicted the outcome cause you got merked, no offense/hate, but its probly cause you havn't battled for a while, word, well, hope you get back into your groove...word verbal, not bad, had some complex stuff in there, creative too...but most of the concepts were played...you had decent wordplay to make them better though, so keep that up....last bar, it was pretty good, i laughed at it...and your opener was tight too, haha, laughed at it, just a couple chuckles, you look like you got a good grip on battling, keep up yo..... v/verbal |
Thanks for da honest vote kesse..........uppin for more honest explained votes.....~1~
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Yeah, thanks for voting Kesse.....hate to freepost, but uppin again.
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Uppin dis shit honest and explained votes ONLY ~1~
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Upping again........throw down a vote.............
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Upping...............come on..................................
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This was feedback posted for Verbal
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