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50Cal. 04-18-05 04:47 AM

ACUITY vs DRAMA QUEEN
 
Check In By WENSDAY Or Topic Wont Be Given Poems Due By FRIDAY NITE 12 PM EASTERN TIME. Edit You Link With At Least 2 Other Poetry Battles In The League You Voted On Voting Ends At 12 Eastern TimeON WENSDAY NITE NEXT WEEK.no Line Length And Dont Write A Topical. This Is A Poetry League I Will Dq You If You Write A Fucking Topical I Hate That Shit Its Not Poetry!!Gotta Actually Win Good Luck To BotH
TOPIC=BLOOD ON MY HANDS

Acuity 04-18-05 10:31 AM

ahh many did u hav 2 giv me DQ in ma first week,she dope :cussing:
( iaint goin easy DQ, here come da heatlol)

check

DQ 04-18-05 11:28 AM

Aw damn, Acuity right away...well g'luck cutie (as if you need it lolz)

Don't think I'm gonna go easy on you either sweetie, it's time to rumble

Checkity Check

DQ

Acuity 04-18-05 03:34 PM

dope topic CALI :thumbup:

Ok its a Nice topipc BUT .... We'd Prefer You Not Post Before your drop Unless you are Cjheckin in ...... It crowds the Thread NO HATE
Good Luck to both of you :thumbup: ...... And DEF A NICE TOPIC


* I hope I get A dope Topic *

DQ 04-18-05 03:42 PM

Woot woot @ the topic... Acuity...you're going down! Hehe, nothing but love though ;)

DQ

Ok its a Nice topipc BUT .... We'd Prefer You Not Post Before your drop Unless you are Cjheckin in ...... It crowds the Thread NO HATE
Good Luck to both of you :thumbup: ...... And DEF A NICE TOPIC


* I hope I get A dope Topic *

DQ 04-22-05 05:56 PM

Quietly laying in a static pose on the cold, grimy soil
Trenches became second home to all of us
Young men in combat, weapons striving for peace
Hungry, crawling rats as our sole companions
Deaf due to never-ending silence of grenades
Patiently waiting for that one inevitable sign
To which we instantly put our lives on the line

No reason, no emotion, feelings blocked
Never looking back, always forward
Red stains like flowers on a green field
Unable to wash away, invisible to our eyes
Only when the night comes, I can live again

Rain like tear drops falling out of sky
Soaked, hurt yet I never felt so alive
Mud slipping through my fingers
Blood of my brothers on my hands
Reminding me the cause of my presence
To prevent more red flowers from falling
In Flanders Fields

Captured by the fog that never rises
Leading to no man's land

50Cal. 04-23-05 03:47 AM

Dq Wins Acuity No Showed Wtf!!


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