im back bitchs
 

its yo boy sinn...back to hold it down again cuz i see yall slippin...


phone ringing...

YO what the fuck dog this better be good...
this dood needs trees i wonder if i should

aight fuck it, meet me at the burga king
ima hustla, so rain or shine u kno ima sling

i got my gat in my lap, i dont like to clap
but come wrong i will give an applause

mane what the fuck where he at
im bout to fuckin ride, cockin the strap

o there he go, ima slow my pace
pop the trunk, and took ah look at his face
hmmm... im-thinkin somethins outta place

but here u go mane, its all the weight
this dood crazy now hes tryina skate

off wit the green and that sets back my loot
so u kno ima pull out n commence to shoot

i took out his legs and picked up my product
now this fucka is bouta get shot up

well i let him have the whole clip
that pussy shouldenta tryed to run wit my shit

o well now its back at the crib to burnin a blunt
hahah the 6am news is talkin bout that stunt

well damn now its time fo some bed
now i got time to clear my head



hahahah a quick lil freestyle for yall im back bitchs

not good at all.you need an original topic. This is simple as fuck.I wouldnt even class this as a topic.
I class these as wanna-b drop. Your not a slinga,so why rhyme about it? try rhyming bout shit the is relevant to you.about your life instead of the guy you wish you were.

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Rhymes- to simple, you using end line rhymes. try using multis.
vocab, plain and simple.boring, try extending your vocab. read a dictionary or somthing.
content/topic. allready stated my thoughts on this.
structure is good.
flow is ok.

overall- not even worth me rating.
get original fam, then you will start to elevate.

pz

hahaha k...im not a slanga ive neva seen weight or any heat right? ahahahah son yo name is worse then princes symbol u fake ass hoe hahaha come correct next time u wanna b puffy ass muthafuckah U AINT A PRODUCER U DONT GOT A LABEL BITCH U DONT KNOW WHAT THE FUCK U TALKIN BOUT SO SHUT YO COCKSUCKAH

kids these days^^^