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†Syck Intent† 04-19-05 01:23 PM

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Vs. Dude Named MC HOOD
...Syck Intent is real..*he stay slangin'*...and MC not sure of his sexuality...so *he stay swingin'*...pfftt...this kid ain't real...the onli tyme M C's Hood is watching *documentaries of gang-banging...*

...i'm tired of fags...so i *stay retirin' wimps*...and put red marks from backhands on ya face *like wired pimps*...Hood not real...so watch me put an end to *MC like depression and suicide attempts*....

...Lyrical Decapitation...since i did it...i'll be tha one *To Tote Ya Head*[b].. He Still Young So Mani Wet Dreams *Will Float Ya Bed*
..besides he can't do audio...cuz his voice *stay cracked like broken legs*...

...Strong and quick to burn this *kids lungs like moonshine*...Dude Hasn't Reached My Level..*so u kno *he's doomed fa' dyin'*...cuz I can just get angry and kill MC like *unpluggin' his phone line*...

Explanationz:
Bar 1-M Sees Hood..Gang-banging...like crips & Bloods.
Bar 2- wired pimps....hyper pimps...MC-Mariah Carey tried to commit suicide and alla that..clinically depressed.
Bar 3-Self. Roflmao.
Bar 4-MC-Modem Connection...
*Don't Get Any...Don't Vote. ~Ghost~


VS. Dude Named Simon Bar Sinister-2 barz.
...Pffft... U Can't Elevate...like skateboarders *jumpin' from flat ramps*...My Rhymes Tap SI's *Spinals like Back Cramps*... IT's Nuffin.. I'll Just Merk Him By Eatin' *SIMONS BARS like Hungry Kids @ Fat Camps...*

...Killed wit Ink & Plastic.. Coroners will *call it saran murder*...off net Simon'll *catch shellz like clam herders*...Cuz Each Of These Bars Will Have Simon Hurling... As If I Was *Fighting Bulemics With Hamburgers...*

[b]Hit Me Up. ~Ghost~

Thorn 04-19-05 01:51 PM

...Syck Intent is real..*he stay slangin'*...
and MC not sure of his sexuality...
so *he stay swingin'*..
.pfftt...this kid ain't real
...the onli tyme M C's Hood is watching *documentaries of gang-banging...*

you might want to fix up that flow, so it is structurd because of RV

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aint gunna work, your lines have to be like

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