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the huh?
in the life of times through life of rhymes/
my soul vibe on lines and sign of crimes/ i can find the grime sublime the prime/ remind the blind we intertwine our kind/ and find a nitch spit our riches grind em quick/ flip these snitch bitches, lie in ditch/ lime and witches brew stew the crew massive/ thought you knew i drew and you grew passive/ my words stay attractive the mental stay active/ stickin these verses to the head keep you captive/ i predict in water like john the baptise/ my coming inflict pain like atoms gone reactive/ blessed are those who blessin them hoes/ and stressin those foes into guessin and woes/ the lesson untold unfold into digression/ watch how daily words served for digestion/ i can let mcees walk fifteen paces/ shoot twice miss and split clean faces/ let the dawn of graces leave traces of my dopeness/ my lyrical rages invade and remake the hopeless/ erradicate the copeless into uncanny submission/ unfanny these bitches and hand me a biscuit/ http://community.rapverse.com/showt...7206post2097206 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...7229post2097229 |
upppinn............................
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6.5/10.......
u got good wordplay son, but ur creativity is BLAH...some of da lines don't make much sense its like u just flowin without thought...but it was tight in its own way..return da favor in my thread "...Da C-Kwence..." aight son |
I Feel Ya That's Why I Called It The Huh?.....thanks For The Info
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