9th Degree vs Blackmage
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No d/r, hate, or bullshit in general

Minimum posts to vote: 400

Check in by: 04-22-05 at 09:04 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Blackmage has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-21-05 09:14 PM.

I can smell the sweetness in you cause you rosary lad
if you was real your family ties wouldn't be for grocery bags
you supposed to be bad? you only got drive cause you gassed
ya voice is nice but it don't help when you talkin outta ya ass
and yea you hungry but you the type to starve in a tub of rice
you only cold wakin up after parties in a tub of ice
only i don't feel a pulse, so get way low fast your like j-lo's ass
your flo and her marriage they ain't gon last
You had a 50-50 Chance tryin to battle these wack cats
but dog you split your chances just playin wit "black"jack"

1. If you wake up in a tub of ice after a party most likely your missin an organ or 2

2. If you have two of the same card in black jack you can split into two hands

Something like 5 mins. to write Luck up 9th

9th Degree has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-22-05 06:51 PM.

You're too cocky about text, I keyed this up demure
So you hopped off your high horse, and landed in the manure
If your rhymes go over my head, mine put a dent in your wig
Your talent is as existent as the crew you rep in your sig
Lyrical Assassins? Where's their forum, I don't understand this kid
Oh, he's the lost hero...the rest of them abandoned him
And I'd say he was a dickrider, but that might be hatin'
So why's he got links to battles he didn't partake in?
You're fakin', not hard, got more than a pot to piss in
And I'm wack, 'cuz they say "you're only as good as your opposition"

Good luck :thumbup:

Uppin'.

This was feedback posted for 9th Degree
 

You're too cocky about text, I keyed this up demure
So you hopped off your high horse, and landed in the manure
HAHA
If your rhymes go over my head, mine put a dent in your wig
Your talent is as existent as the crew you rep in your sig
I GOTCHA MAYNE
Lyrical Assassins? Where's their forum, I don't understand this kid
Oh, he's the lost hero...the rest of them abandoned him
I DONT THINK THEY RHYME
And I'd say he was a dickrider, but that might be hatin'
So why's he got links to battles he didn't partake in?
THAT WAS NICE MAN
You're fakin', not hard, got more than a pot to piss in
And I'm wack, 'cuz they say "you're only as good as your opposition"
HAHA

THAT WAS NICE MAN KEEP IT TRILL MAN

Voted For: 9th Degree

ehhh this wasn't much of a battle, yall coulda came harder than this, but ima have to go wit9th degree on this joint barely. he had a couple better punches than blackmage.

blackmage= he had better multies in his verse and some decent punhes, like the "family ties" one and the"talkin outt ya ass" one, but other than that i wasn't feelin the reast of his verse. no really outstanding punches/personals in there structure was fine

9th degree= expecting more but overall a decent drop, u had some goo dpersonals to get athim with. like the one about him havin links to battles he aint in, and the one about him havin a sig with a crew that don't exist, that wa spretty hot, ya structure was good even tho thats not very important. Also, u had better vocab in there even tho it was sort of forced.

Overal= 9th takes this joint his verse was more thorough wit better punches and flow so he gets the win.

Return the favor please, links are in the SIG holla at me...1..

I can smell the sweetness in you cause you rosary lad
if you was real your family ties wouldn't be for grocery bags
NO
you supposed to be bad? you only got drive cause you gassed
ya voice is nice but it don't help when you talkin outta ya ass
I GOT YA
and yea you hungry but you the type to starve in a tub of rice
you only cold wakin up after parties in a tub of ice
IIGHT
only i don't feel a pulse, so get way low fast your like j-lo's ass
your flo and her marriage they ain't gon last
HAHA
You had a 50-50 Chance tryin to battle these wack cats
but dog you split your chances just playin wit "black"jack"
NICE MULTI MAN

NOW THIS WAS A HARD BATTLE BUT IF I WAS ABLE TO VOTE I WOULD HAVE TO GO WITH 9TH DEGREE BECAUSE HE HAD 1 THING U DIDNT HAVE AND THE WAS A MULTI YALL BOTH DID GOOD KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK PEEPS
V//9TH DEGREE

Voted For: 9th Degree

im gunna give this one to 9th, i think it was pretty close though, both you came out with some nice stuff, blatent, yet to the point, some nice disses in here, but i think 9th had better personals, and i laughed hard at his closer, haha, so thats why im giving him the vote although you did but up a nice verse black, just thought 9th had a little better one, no hate

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If your rhymes go over my head, mine put a dent in your wig
Your talent is as existent as the crew you rep in your sig
You're fakin', not hard, got more than a pot to piss in
And I'm wack, 'cuz they say "you're only as good as your opposition"

I can smell the sweetness in you cause you rosary lad
if you was real your family ties wouldn't be for grocery bags

v/9th Degree...meh, not bad of a battle....rtf in the king solo battle, if you could honestly....no hate, pz

Meh, upping.

Voted For: 9th Degree

Lemme Drop A Lil Somethin Somethin In HEre

The BEst Battle Ive read All Week

9th
Im Really Feelin This VErse man You really Did Start off weak but then Its Like a verse jus uped its own game in like the 2nd bar or 3rd bar but anyway Im Likein The Personals Im Guessing That After You Said that shit about his sig he went and took it out ?....Yeah I Know Bcuz why would you say it if it wasnt true ? LOL any way I Feel That Basically You Took This Battle with no Hassle Jus Next Time...Try To Come into Your verse Stronger ..And thats all I Gotta Say to You Nice drop =!!

RTF In a Battle in My Link PLEASE!!

Blackmage
Now Ive seen you do way better than this So Whats wrong Man ?> Any way your verse started off strong and that was nice but after like the 3nd bar its like you jus threw away the battle and you was repeating yourself Bcuz you said somethin about asses ike twelve times and then you didnt come with any realky good personals that made your verse good so all im sayin is that i feel you diint get this battle atleast compared to your oppenent No Hate Please dont Go and Hate Vote against Me Bcuz I Can Tell Bcuz Both of my battles are 3-0 so We all know I Won So
RTF in Either battle in the link in my sig

HIT UP MY BATTLE

Well yeah it looks like 9th's takin this one and for the record no i didn't take those links out because he said that, that's a bitch move cause i've had people do that to me, actually i was in the konquest lyricist league and we're required to drop 3 links and i never did get around to taking them out but yea i had 3 links in my shit that i wasn't in. and yea i was in a rush cause i thought he said a half hour to check a day to post when it was the other way around so yea i just keystyled some shit up no personals or nothin i was too tired...but that's still shit for an excuse so 9th'll proly take this one but better believe i'm takin the next one...................
.............Long ass uppin paragraph

Voted For: 9th Degree

I can smell the sweetness in you cause you rosary lad
if you was real your family ties wouldn't be for grocery bags
^^decent, ok opener
you supposed to be bad? you only got drive cause you gassed
ya voice is nice but it don't help when you talkin outta ya ass
^^eh, kinda ruined it by complimenting him...
and yea you hungry but you the type to starve in a tub of rice
you only cold wakin up after parties in a tub of ice
^^colds a diss?..wasnt feelin the punch homie
only i don't feel a pulse, so get way low fast your like j-lo's ass
your flo and her marriage they ain't gon last
^^decent setup, but ya punch lacked content
You had a 50-50 Chance tryin to battle these wack cats
but dog you split your chances just playin wit "black"jack"
^^ok concept but punch didnt connect
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overall your verse had good concepts but you either worded them off or they had bad delivery...bnasically your punches were lackin n didnt hit hard...good attempt though...
think you shouldve takin a lil more time n it wouldve been much better no hate ........

You're too cocky about text, I keyed this up demure
So you hopped off your high horse, and landed in the manure
^^lol,. decent opener...
If your rhymes go over my head, mine put a dent in your wig
Your talent is as existent as the crew you rep in your sig
^^oh, that connected, decent punch ...
Lyrical Assassins? Where's their forum, I don't understand this kid
Oh, he's the lost hero...the rest of them abandoned him
^^lol,....damn way to play on the sig
And I'd say he was a dickrider, but that might be hatin'
So why's he got links to battles he didn't partake in?
^^lol,...nice, consistent so far
You're fakin', not hard, got more than a pot to piss in
And I'm wack, 'cuz they say "you're only as good as your opposition"
^^lmao, nice closer
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overall 9th, you played on his sig well, n nice flips on the punches, really consistent verse, i liked this drop, well rounded disses...normally i see a weak bar in ya verses but this 1 was real solid throughout...
no hate 9th got this with way more creativity n better punches, all of them connected...good battle
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RTF in the sig

Voted For: 9th Degree

ok both had good vocab flow and struture but while blackmage had weak punches and disses 9th slayed him with personals that lead into punches that hit like tyson in his prime.from 1st to last line 9th use personals to crack black in half black you had a decent verse but your punches and personals were weak as hell while 9th just outclassed you on them and that wins battles.
both rtf on link in sig