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Just A Keystyle, Have I Elevated At All?
All them fakers out there jealous cuz they can't take us
They just talk shit and give us understatements They won't be safe when we come out to give um stitches They got me suspicious and now they bein petrified bitches the terrified, their heart stiffens, get with it Their heart quickens it's time to die no quittin Finish ya business stop stayin hidden Stop bein a pussy just cuz you know you aint winnin Listen it's my time to glisten get up outta here with that wishin If you gonna roll with Urkron there aint no bull shittin An army within one city motha fucka Northside of Akron Stop the yippin and yappin, tap in To the system spittin a lyrical cataclysm These fakers talkin like they have some wisdom I'm spittin at them bitches and being exact, specific All the producers want me because my rap's exquisite I don't have to give it to them pass the smith and wesson Holla at me and i'll leave ya a track with a blessin Left with a steppin stone up to L.C's throne Operatin and army screamin go go go go They don't want no more ya'll conna have to quit it I aint givin you a chance to rip it glance then spit it Keep ya stance and give it see if the fans will dig it They probably won't so pull up ya pants get with it |
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Hm... this would have been alot better..
Your structure was decent , maybe next time you can match up your bars.. Your punchlines were okay, feel some were weak, could have been alot better.. Elevate on your wordplay , and your vocab , try to use better words.. not just that simple stuff, cus not all the time will it come out good, Try not to worse your mutlies, let em just flow... but overall just keep it up , and you'll elevate over time . |
Yo this was cool,i cant say if you elevated cuz i dont remember te other ones but it was pretty nice,structure was alright,nice vocab man,yup your flow is good at somplaces and wack at others,but meh,atleas you flowed lol,anyway good one
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aight thanx, UPPIN
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