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[rate]~Gangsta~[rate]
Hottest shit I've dropped in a while...Dont sleep! I will return all favors, so please hook me up with some feedback on this...Thanx...
"Gangsta" Ayo... I run with, thugs and gorillas, thugs that'll kill ya Killas, hustlas and dealers, got guns that'll drill ya I come with pumps for the squealers, pump it and fill ya I dump 'em in rivers, Forreal, I'm the one that'll kill ya I'm the nice breed, I fight 'til I see the white meat Nobody's like me, cuz when I spit, I make the mic bleed! Go ahead and try me, if you think that you nice But I'ma give you a "piece of advice" like the "letters 'I E'" * The dude is just sick, I come thru with a tool and my clique My crew will just click, and leave you fools in a ditch I'm the dude who will hit, y'all hate cuz I'm hot now And I'll "take ya top down" like when I "cruise in my whip" Black is real, y'all mad that I'll blast my steel And hate the fact I'm "running shit" like "crap on wheels" I'm a savage still, and if you don't believe I'll bust Then I'll put the heat to ya, like "You can ask the steel!" *piece of advice...the letters 'i' and 'e' are in the word 'advice' therefore, they are a piece of advice |
hot shit playa
concept was nice |
Thanx fam...appreciate the feed...uppin for more!
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Hm... this was okay ,not the best ive seen..
your punchlines were okay, some were just weak , the best punchline was: Go ahead and try me, if you think that you nice But I'ma give you a "piece of advice" like the "letters 'I E'" * ^ i was feeling that , the other stuff were just played , and too simple for me.. your structure was decent , but you need to try to match up your bars... keep it up , elevate next time try not to use the same word to rhyme with , elevate your wordplay/ vocab , and Drop a link or this will get closed... some honest feed back ... |
Iight man thats all I need...an honest opinion...thanx...And hold up I got that link comin...
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Uppin this shit for some more feedback...Honesty is the key...
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uppin...............
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this was kool, the multies were iight, but what made the verse not appealing to me is that some of the lines didnt rhyme(mighta been how i read it)...my fav line was bout advice and crap on wheels...this cooda been hotter but also cooda been worse...this was a lil bit above average drop...id say 5.5 or 6/10
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Damn...a 6? What didnt rhyme?
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im eant 5.5 or 6.5, but yea i see how your lines rhyme now, but like BC said match up your bars, thats what made it confusing....but yea 7
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Hmm...iight man thanx for the feed...Uppin for more...1
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Stop Bein A Bitch And Try Out For Livin' Legendz You Know We Hotter Than E.f.
Lol, Nice Shit Man Try Out Already |
hey when ever you wanna battle name the time and date im down lets get it done
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^^Haha...get online you biting coclsucking bitch!!!^^^
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