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lil S 04-22-05 02:31 AM

just some shit
 
tellin you what dawg ya moms a hoe
i caught her on the side walk for a stop and go
i'll leave you lit like a hundred candles
i got more flame then even hell can handle
i'll have the biggest christian thinking heavens a scandle
i'll rip open your heart so on your life you can gamble
nigga come close i'll cut you up with my axe
catch you on freeze frame like the house of wax
nigga i come threw with a semi automatic
so much friction in my barrow before you die you'll see static
im the trueist nigga sence livin legends kill more ppl then 9'11
im like the sun ain't nothin hotter the only words you know is look i'm your father

BiZzO 04-22-05 03:17 AM

k homie.. u need to work on ur structure, flow, punches everything...
man u needa elevate... no more of that mom n dad shit... its played and over done...
peace1~


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