D-Thug vs evil
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
spit in 30 min
100 posts to vote

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 04-22-05 at 10:38 AM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

evil has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-22-05 10:08 AM.

D-Thug has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-22-05 10:09 AM.

Yo, im gonna kill this emcee who thinks he is cold*
Your 17..and you can’t beat a 13 year old?*
Some pretend thug man I give you pity
You think you big? You couldn’t be big if you were pam Anderson tity
Im blowing you over like you were in a shipwreck just hanging on
Im sorry you probally be still sucking dicks like Elton john
My disses are like you hitting a stone wall
Just 1 blow your still gona fall
Dude you rap and your from who the hells knows? Plz tell me your location
I beat you quick like a girl touch your dick and you had premature ejaculation

evil u dont even know the meaning,
evils wen i take my lyrics and let u feel them,
evils wen i take a knife and peel back ur skin,
put it in a bag send it back at u again,
u've gone mental ur runnin up the wall,
just count to 3 coz u cant rap at all,
ur so small u should leave RV,
need 9 lives coz u get killed every week,

Voted For: evil

evil u dont even know the meaning,
evils wen i take my lyrics and let u feel them,
2...just bleh!!! wack opener!!
evils wen i take a knife and peel back ur skin,
put it in a bag send it back at u again,
2...wack again!!! wtf!?!?!
u've gone mental ur runnin up the wall,
just count to 3 coz u cant rap at all,
3...prolly ya best line so far!
ur so small u should leave RV,
need 9 lives coz u get killed every week,
3...gay closer!

OVERALL: 10/40 (25%)

Yo, im gonna kill this emcee who thinks he is cold*
Your 17..and you can’t beat a 13 year old?*
3...ok, just filler really, weak opener!!
Some pretend thug man I give you pity
You think you big? You couldn’t be big if you were pam Anderson tity
4...an attempt at a meta but NO!!
Im blowing you over like you were in a shipwreck just hanging on
Im sorry you probally be still sucking dicks like Elton john
2...NO!! gay shit is played!!
My disses are like you hitting a stone wall
Just 1 blow your still gona fall
2...weak...filler!!
Dude you rap and your from who the hells knows? Plz tell me your location
I beat you quick like a girl touch your dick and you had premature ejaculation
5...best line....but still weak!!

OVERALL: 16/50 (32%)


overall this was a weak battle, almost not even worth votin on. no hate but both of y'all had nuthin for punches and personals...i mean thug tried with that evil shit but it was just gay and didnt come off. evil work on ya structure, it is fucked, too many stretched lines....overall both y'all need to elevate on punches and personals before u try on the more creative shit!!

V/ - evil

Voted For: evil

Both had really played lines, and need improvement... lets see...

You think you big? You couldn’t be big if you were pam Anderson tity

^^ heard it....

I beat you quick like a girl touch your dick and you had premature ejaculation

^^ heard it..

Both weak.. although evil had the better verse.. please D-Thug.. work on your rhymes, well both of you should... anyways good luck to both of you with your stay here at RV

vote - evil

This was feedback posted for evil
 

Yo, im gonna kill this emcee who thinks he is cold*
Your 17..and you can’t beat a 13 year old?*
Some pretend thug man I give you pity
You think you big? You couldn’t be big if you were pam Anderson tity
Im blowing you over like you were in a shipwreck just hanging on
Im sorry you probally be still sucking dicks like Elton john
My disses are like you hitting a stone wall
Just 1 blow your still gona fall
Dude you rap and your from who the hells knows? Plz tell me your location
I beat you quick like a girl touch your dick and you had premature ejaculation


u had good punches that hit preety well a few played lines that was slight flip decent flow was good i like how u tryed to get complex a little bit nice verse 7.0/10




evil u dont even know the meaning,
evils wen i take my lyrics and let u feel them,
evils wen i take a knife and peel back ur skin,
put it in a bag send it back at u again,
u've gone mental ur runnin up the wall,
just count to 3 coz u cant rap at all,
ur so small u should leave RV,
need 9 lives coz u get killed every week,

what the hell was this? u'r bars are short as hell which aint help ya flow fix that up ya punches wasnt there it was more like u just talking i saw no effort no complexity noting i think u need to try harder next time

2.0/10

Voted For: evil

Sorry, but this battle was hella weak. Im gonna Feed yea anyways.

Yo, im gonna kill this emcee who thinks he is cold*
Your 17..and you can’t beat a 13 year old?*
^ Not bad personal if true... 5/10
Some pretend thug man I give you pity
You think you big? You couldn’t be big if you were pam Anderson tity
meh... 4/10
Im blowing you over like you were in a shipwreck just hanging on
Im sorry you probally be still sucking dicks like Elton john
1st line was irrelevant to the second seemingly...mabe if you gave an explanation for a connection. But no - 2/10
My disses are like you hitting a stone wall
Just 1 blow your still gona fall
uhhh... 2/10
Dude you rap and your from who the hells knows? Plz tell me your location
I beat you quick like a girl touch your dick and you had premature ejaculation
Wow^, are you threatening him, or are you telling him what you wanna do to him? 1/10
*

I think all in all, you gotta hit harder with stronger punches, and better personals....
:14/50
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evil u dont even know the meaning,
evils wen i take my lyrics and let u feel them,
..........uhh? right...... I dont get it but mabe next time you'll fill me in with an explanation to your damnation. >1/10
evils wen i take a knife and peel back ur skin,
put it in a bag send it back at u again,
^not even whack. Just straight Random. .005/10
u've gone mental ur runnin up the wall,
just count to 3 coz u cant rap at all,
I dono why he should count to three at all.... but ill reward you with 3/10 for tryn
ur so small u should leave RV,
need 9 lives coz u get killed every week,
Same old "leave RV" shit, different pile....its been murdered a few million times im sure. 1/10.
5.005/40
D, you gotta start flowin more, and workin on your struc. Also try and use some more hard hitting personals.. and try and use words that rhyme too. Im sure you could do alot better.... just try harder.

Voted For: D-Thug

i gave it to u man u nice with it but stop his name alot

Voted For: evil

Evil straight up D-Thug was just weak.Have da shit didnt even rhyme all that Good for thug....my advice for thug is Elevate or leave......Evil consumes the thug

Voted For: evil

Ok, Check This..

This Battle Was Definitly A Newb Battle.

First Of D-Thug, You Didn't Even Submit A Battle Verse. That Shit You Typed Up Would Be Considered Lyrics To A Song. There Wasnt A Single Punch nor Personal Anywhere In Your Verse.

Ok For Evil, Your Verse Was Very Basic With Played Lines, but It Doesn't Even Matter. You Actually Tried To Throw Punches and Shit Within Your Verse. You Win This Battle Due To You Actually Spit A Battle Verse and Your Opponet Opened Up With An Open Mic.

Vote: Evil

~R~