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NeFisTo 04-22-05 03:36 PM

Legend Killer
 
Fuck some LL Bitches.


You know Kids are wack when they cant Fights there own Battles..
Riden eachother they might as well Wear matching Dick Saddles..
Teachers pet says hes changed but hes still Born to be a Fuckin Narc..
The Reason Tonys "Green" Cause he feels My iLLness tearing him Apart..
Some Legend these Herbs could be Mel Gibson and it still be Brave-Who?..
Cause shits went down the Drain when The Friendly Ghost has to Save-You..
Face it Your not on my Level ive left all Your Ego's Fuckin Sore..
Especially since This was just another stop on The Whore Herbs Tour..


Short and to the Point,Yall are some wack ass Nobodys.


http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2103427 Link i guess i need.

J. Luth 04-22-05 03:42 PM

yea, am feelin' this. short and to the point really. nice drop. Good drop yo Keep it up. opner was ok, two middle lines were ptetty dope. And closer was aiight. But out of 10 I give it 8/10. keep droppin' yo. pc

King Solo 04-22-05 04:23 PM

nice drop famz..................

a little short but gud..................

opener was funny.......closer was aight but needs work......the 2 bars in between were dope...........keep doin ya thang!!! 7/10

Murdah.txt 04-22-05 04:26 PM

Weak..................

Young Drama 04-22-05 04:28 PM

Lmao

Goodness Gracious U Wack Nigga

Dont Come At Us Unless Itz Correct Cuz U Trash

Do We Even Need To Respond To Such A Nobody?

NeFisTo 04-22-05 04:30 PM

Battle me is all ima say.

Notice 2 vets says its above a 7 and only LL bitches say its weak lmao.

Its more at Tony Green and caspers punk ass.

Murdah.txt 04-22-05 04:32 PM

Thats Why There One Weak Played Line Against ME U Bitch Made And Aint Worth A BATTLE WIT ME BUT ILL BE DROPIN A NICE DISS HOE :thefinger

NeFisTo 04-22-05 04:32 PM

Just battle me your fucking wack and know you cant win so dont waste your time dissing me if you'll never battle me.

Kawn Flixx 04-22-05 04:34 PM

This was a decent drop...
Like Solo said its alittle short , i feel if it was longer it could have been better..
your opener was funny, lol, sorta died , in the middle , then got alittle better..
Your structure was good ... i like your personals , and you had some nice personals...
keep it up i feel you can elevate on how you word your drop..
i feel some bars could have been better...


Ps: drop a link or this will be closed

otto maddex 04-22-05 04:37 PM

You know Kids are wack when they cant Fights there own Battles..
Riden eachother they might as well Wear matching Dick Saddles..
nothin special bout this homie.......and im not too familiar with what a 'DICK SADDLE' is..........
Teachers pet says hes changed but hes still Born to be a Fuckin Narc..
The Reason Tonys "Green" Cause he feels My iLLness tearing him Apart..
first line was filler.......green/illness i understand but think that it coulda been worded better........
Some Legend these Herbs could be Mel Gibson and it still be Brave-Who?..
Cause shits went down the Drain when The Friendly Ghost has to Save-You..
new to the site but i think that this was aight....
Face it Your not on my Level ive left all Your Ego's Fuckin Sore..
Especially since This was just another stop on The Whore Herbs Tour..
closer was below average homie..........shoulda came with somethin harder imo..........
homie you need ta get savage on these dudes homie............your joint lacked multies, hard punches, wordplay was here but average at best..................

Murdah.txt 04-22-05 04:59 PM

yo set it up ill cee 6-8 lines if not ill decline lets see your skill hoe....

~Tony Green~ 04-22-05 07:39 PM

Weak as fuck you bit off Invektive when me and him battle and plus you cheat yeah nigga I know about your battle against King Yayo you are a cheater and I will not waste my time battling a cheater!

Cannibal Sativa 04-22-05 08:39 PM

yall motherfuckers is funny......i wonder if anyone actually goes to real battles?

NeFisTo 04-22-05 08:50 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Tony Green
Weak as fuck you bit off Invektive when me and him battle and plus you cheat yeah nigga I know about your battle against King Yayo you are a cheater and I will not waste my time battling a cheater!



You meen the battle i KO'd Him AND he voted for himself lmao.

Dirty Nigga 04-22-05 09:08 PM

pretty decent verse man, i wouldnt be pissed if it was mine, i'ma tell ya that much...lol naaah

it was right on point tho, wordplay was creative, punches an metas were creative on point, an the flow just read well, not much i can fault

leave feed on my thought you knew keystyle in return

thanks dawg...8/10 fa this


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