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Dirty Nigga 04-22-05 05:39 PM

So Low...(Solo Diss)
 
LOL..........
He made a diss ta me revealing ''the truth'' or some bullshit, its only right i reply...................

KID........... You stoop so-lo that you made a hypocritical Diss???
...You backstabbed L.S....But i shouldnt have mentioned This
Made threads dissin the crew, only fa Kon ta turn around n Ride You
hopin he thinks ya dope, he was callin me ''layde'' cause he's gay, Dude
wishin i had ah pussy....but i didnt, so he turned ta the nearest Homo
an who was there with they pants at they ankles?..the one n only Solo
naw, i wont leave ya with a hole-ho, but i recall you sayin i'm Gangsta?
then i had ta get u off my dick by sayin your an ugly british wanksta!!!
how you gonna sit an say i'm fake? lets cast our minds back ta ''Made Men''
i was the only thing on ya mind when you was jottin down with ya Pen
gave me constant propps, dedicted ya whole verse on the true King
bald fuck, never confrontin a ''black head''..unless u squeeze them things
in the mirror, lookin at yourself......... an all you see is pitty an Disgrace....
hottest thing in ya whole clique iz mizz fyre...an even she spittin in ya face!
fuck this cupcake cookie.........have his crumbs scattered all over the place
Makin threads about who L.S Rather have, let THE COUNCIL settle the Case
I'm witta established bunch, servin you L.S kids like ah school Lunch........
so when its Crunchtime, you similiar too a wrestler, while i throw Punchlines
have you touchin on nothin like a Mime, yupp....Esco'z now in his Prtime
i'm juss curious ta why you bad mouth me? .......u been lovin me fa time
if sonnin' is a cryhme, then i'm guilty as charged .............of Adoption...
now this is a checkmate, no move fa the ''king'' .....defeat is your Option
i never wanted this ta happen, your annoyin, but Brawla was the problem
apparenrtly everybody herbs ta you...so that means you lyrically rob-them?
when a challenge steps up, it take you around 2 hours for too sit n write
so tell me....with Kons dick in ya ass, how is your ''shit..............tight???''
i didnt wanna diss Fliktz, he was my boy, but its obvious he took Sides
yall actin like i didnt revive L.S.....must be compulsive liars wit no pride?
when its time ta Ride, solo, ya gonna be like ya name, nobody trynna Holla
cause beef with me?....................
HA!!! You'll get as far as steven hawkins trynna buy a hooker witta DOLLA!
Don shotta, buckin shots, the dopest man ta ever grace the Saigonz.....
i left fa 2 weeks in texas, came back...only ta find out they-gone.........
what does that say fa yall? shit, carry on pretendin ya dont need me
but ya lame beef is over quicker than Jadakiss & Fat Joe droppin BE EASY!

$wollzilla™ 04-22-05 05:42 PM

i like tha punches in this...solo's was like all off course diss...yours was structured n stayed to da story or plotline...i like it 7.5/10

Touché 04-22-05 05:51 PM

ok people can say i am sayin this cuz we beefin

but i got like 2 thirds thru and got bored to tears....................

ya stretched lines are gay...........ya structure is gud, everythin like a box but as i recall it was Kon and me that helped you with that!!!!

ya opening few bars were ok apart from the fact that gay shit is played....dont u learn from what people say...................notice i didnt use any gay lines in my diss!!!

if it is a diss to me then why are you bringin Kon into the picture....how is that stayin on story............even though an open mic diss aint a story so that dumb fuck above tha King.D.hug is tlkin shit.

and you tlkin about how u hard in the council..........i was with the council months ago and look in that thread in LS forum i made today..........@ came in offerin me a position with the council again!!!!!!!!

overall i give ya drop a 6/10

gud attempt!! i wud say lets battle to settle it but i already whored you 5-0 just recently!!!!!

mizz fyre 04-22-05 05:54 PM

nice diss.....good structure....sometimes flow was off tho but nice punches used.....7/10

Dirty Nigga 04-22-05 05:56 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by ....Acolyte....
ok people can say i am sayin this cuz we beefin

but i got like 2 thirds thru and got bored to tears....................

ya stretched lines are gay...........ya structure is gud, everythin like a box but as i recall it was Kon and me that helped you with that!!!!

ya opening few bars were ok apart from the fact that gay shit is played....dont u learn from what people say...................notice i didnt use any gay lines in my diss!!!

if it is a diss to me then why are you bringin Kon into the picture....how is that stayin on story............even though an open mic diss aint a story so that dumb fuck above tha King.D.hug is tlkin shit.

and you tlkin about how u hard in the council..........i was with the council months ago and look in that thread in LS forum i made today..........@ came in offerin me a position with the council again!!!!!!!!

overall i give ya drop a 6/10

gud attempt!! i wud say lets battle to settle it but i already whored you 5-0 just recently!!!!!

thanks for the feedback, 6/10 beats my opinnon of ah 5/10 on your drop :thumbup:

$wollzilla™ 04-22-05 05:57 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by ....Acolyte....
ok people can say i am sayin this cuz we beefin

but i got like 2 thirds thru and got bored to tears....................

ya stretched lines are gay...........ya structure is gud, everythin like a box but as i recall it was Kon and me that helped you with that!!!!

ya opening few bars were ok apart from the fact that gay shit is played....dont u learn from what people say...................notice i didnt use any gay lines in my diss!!!

if it is a diss to me then why are you bringin Kon into the picture....how is that stayin on story............even though an open mic diss aint a story so that dumb fuck above tha King.D.hug is tlkin shit.

and you tlkin about how u hard in the council..........i was with the council months ago and look in that thread in LS forum i made today..........@ came in offerin me a position with the council again!!!!!!!!

overall i give ya drop a 6/10



gud attempt!! i wud say lets battle to settle it but i already whored you 5-0 just recently!!!!!




lol tryna go hard in UK...nigga get serious...end of story...so dont come at me

Touché 04-22-05 05:58 PM

^^^yea u say that now

but we all know you was feelin my verse

at least i stayed dissin you...........i didnt need to bring anyone else in it just to add more filler lines to my verse................

Dirty Nigga 04-22-05 06:05 PM

LOL
They are not fillers...........
i hated on Kon for a good reazon, what you know about me? an what i think about L.S Mmbers? nothin..............
he took sides, even after you stabbed him in the back...so your ah bitch for bein a backstabber an he a bitch for lovin you, its a diss ta both yall

Dirty Nigga 04-22-05 06:06 PM

Look
stick ta feedback, you said what u feel about the peice, end of story
i am not freeposting in your open mic am i?
same goes for you D Hug, yall take ya shit somewhere else, this is for feedback

E.C 04-22-05 06:07 PM

ay esco mayne i thought this was a solo diss not L.S diss.... i fought we was koo man! n e wayz good diss solid punches all the way through some decent personals all the way through but man... dnt be dissin L.S man we still fam!

$wollzilla™ 04-22-05 06:09 PM

it says chryme sindicate in yor sig....u should get a new 1 :thumbup:

Dirty Nigga 04-22-05 06:12 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by E.C
ay esco mayne i thought this was a solo diss not L.S diss.... i fought we was koo man! n e wayz good diss solid punches all the way through some decent personals all the way through but man... dnt be dissin L.S man we still fam!

naw, i didnt diss you, an i wouldnt...you my boy, an i gave mizz fyre propps...
its not an L.S diss, just Solo...an Kon for takin sides an ridin him....D Hug, stop freeposting

BiZzO 04-23-05 04:33 AM

yo i liked this peice... had some good punches, and some realli good lines.. keep em comin...
7/10.. :thumbup:

E.C 04-23-05 07:58 AM

ight man i wanna do an open mic wit u soon ight?

Dirty Nigga 04-23-05 08:03 AM

Yeah, fa sho'...
just name the topic, an pm me the details whenever your ready my nigga!


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