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Dirty Nigga 04-22-05 08:57 PM

I Thought You Knew? [Its The Council, Dawg!] <<Keystle>>
 
All my life i i wanted ta be a star...until i found out i was the Sun
See? when it comes ta beef, niggas pull over, stunt an they Done..
Council got shit locked, tephlon's cocked, playin the cards lord Dealt
an you can tell i'm around..cause like a blind man, my presence is Felt
Thats the beef you smelt, an ta me its finger lickin good like Porn...
this Solo character dont get the picture til the weapons is Drawn:shoot:
...I Got That Fiyah..ta scorn, a new council emcee has been Born..
Bitch! show somthin, its war time...let my soldiers sound the Horns
Prick, you aint nothin but Thorns, its over in the space of a weekend
this whiteboys hot headed......................an the bullets heat seekin
TC Runs its, yall on some gay shit.........an i dont play like that, man
so ay! fuck batman an robbin..........cause i'm robbin witta bat, man
i wont ever clap hands wit yall niggas, i just clap back an pull triggas
see, i'm on some movie shit, the way i BlockBuss an roll in Figgas
shit it worked fa Jigga, an KRS An apparently an RV Crew....:thumbup:
so ta get some propps....i'ma name this keystyle the BLUEPRINT 202
Yall niggas is THRU, i'ma just pay some herbs ta make ah Hit...
Council & you?.................
dont mix, like 2 dicks an no bitch, yall find yourself in some serious shit! (ha haaa) :shoot:

Dirty Nigga 04-22-05 09:20 PM

A'yo, uppin fa some feedback....hit me up witta link too, an i'ma RTF For datass

Crunk, crunk.....

Dirty Nigga 04-23-05 07:03 AM

uppin.....how yall gonna sleep on this?
c'mopn, just leave feed an ah link n i'll hit ya back

Daubs 04-23-05 07:09 AM

nice drop, was consistent all the way through and this bar had me laughin..""TC Runs its, yall on some gay shit.........an i dont play like that, man
so ay! fuck batman an robbin..........cause i'm robbin witta bat, man""

overall nices punches and wordplay, good drop 7/10

hit a vote up on my links in sig if ya will.

Dirty Nigga 04-23-05 07:16 AM

appreciate the feed, i'ma hit up one of ya battles right now homeboy

BiZzO 04-23-05 07:40 AM

yeah very nice verse... i liked your consistancy, punches and a good flow..
i liked this peice alot..
7.5/10

Dirty Nigga 04-23-05 07:44 AM

ayo thanks dawg ^^^
i appreciate dat!

uppin this yall..

Ysdat 04-23-05 08:34 AM

what what..

TC!!!!

good drop fam.

Dirty Nigga 04-23-05 08:36 AM

^^^
word

i thought they all know already
TC Runs it.............

had ta straighten some niggas out on that fact, thanks for the feed tho....council is back like woah, niggas!

King Solo 04-23-05 09:38 AM

not a bad drop..................

i see u threw me in there, i am an inspiration to many.....lol!!!

but overall a pretty good drop..............the structure was nice it all flowed well together, the last bar was the only one that was a little choppy!!!
some nice lines, ya stayed on point talkin how the council run shit...not that they do!!
but ya know, reppin ya crew n shit........its all good.......best line was the one you rockin in ya sig, the batman & robin shit.....creative and funny!!! overall i say 7/10!!

¤ÐÅž¤ 04-23-05 11:17 AM

^^haha, not running shit........ya we do
we just recruited strobe as our co-mod....lmfao.
nah, this was nice work tef ...
keep it up....tc reppin....(batman line was koo)

Dirty Nigga 04-23-05 12:59 PM

thanks yall, i appreciate that...

uppin for some more feed yall..

Dirty Nigga 04-23-05 04:40 PM

uppin this...........

Kawn Flixx 04-23-05 06:21 PM

This was a pretty dope peice.. nice job teph
You used some dope punchlines..
the best one i think was
TC Runs its, yall on some gay shit.........an i dont play like that, man
so ay! fuck batman an robbin..........cause i'm robbin witta bat, man""
Rofl, hah nice wordplay, and good concept..
Your flow was good , and your structure, was on tact , overall keep it up
this was a dope peice
DROP A LINK OR THIS WILL BE CLOSED

Dirty Nigga 04-23-05 07:15 PM

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=187271
^^^^
there ya gone mistah bono..
i appreciate the feed also

uppin this yall...


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