Sick N Tired
I’m sick n tired of being sick n tired. I mean it
I was born into hell I felt the heat inside as semen Soldier bodies leaning the coldest eyes are seeing 3rd person sight as the soul inside is leaving not only lives are being snatched high from Mee-in(men) Morals have capsized and we chastise our women And they say “Sky’s the limit” now that’s lies cuz listen They stopped using wool now they drape eyes in linen So we look “Right” at winners and “Left” prizes hidden Then we’re “Back” at square one with those slight beginnings Then move “Forward” to where we might be driven By lively villains to various unsightly endings But that’s like concealing the true light within us Blast causing spark to take us right right through ceilings Then lay claim to the blessings God has given We are his children yet in still we hardly chillin We struggle every day look how hard we living Even the most prominent are still starving niggas Just a mob of niggas looking for larger figures In the process of sinning I hope God forgive us… left feed on Sinn's piece "When the Sun Goes down" http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=185568 |
wow, calm, this was pretty koo, i was feeling it , the
way you approached your topic title,..."sick of it" with the directional content"left"right"center"back" like a confuzed sickness..=sick of it. well that how i interpretated it vocab was good, along with you ryhme scheme, which ive never read b4...weird cuz it wasnt normal, yet it didnt fall off,... ya im kinda "speechless on this"...doesnt happen often...well done fam :thumbup: |
Word this was a nice drop..
I was really feeling it... You Had A nice concept, good Topic You really grabbed the readers attention, You had some nice wordplay , some nice imagery.. Your vocab was on point , you used some nice Emotions And good feeling which really showed you took time out to do this drop You had a nice rhyme scheme , good flow , and rhythem overall keep it up, and i hope to see another drop from you soon Ps:Thankz for dropping a link |
i dropped links
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This topic is nice. good lyrics thru the whole peice nice emotion.
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hahahahha yall are for real.....like seriously????? u gon say this shit is better then my shit....come on mane u drop the n-bomb even tho u aint prolly black, hahaha and look
3rd person sight as the soul inside is leaving not only lives are being snatched high from Mee-in(men) Morals have capsized and we chastise our women And they say “Sky’s the limit” now that’s lies cuz listen They stopped using wool now they drape eyes in linen hahahah YO n u talk bad on my shit?????? mee-in??????? hahahahahahha damn son yall be talkin all that bullshit when all u do is rap bout bullshit AND DONT EVEN DO THAT GOOD |
you got no clue ^^do you?..you see his rec n him droppin on a topic
n you automatically think your better,..wow, the ignorance of some kids these days, ill tell you what...battle calm...n try to actually throw a punchline in your verse.....i dare ya kid.........hell battle any1, you dont have what it takes to win a battle from what ive read in you open mics . that is all, now stop hatin on peeps or bones will bann ya ass |
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upping for fam |
first time besides a couple of punchlines on MSN that i saw your stuff Calm
topic of the peice was good, an you followed it all the way thru with consistant vocab, an meaningful rhymes, flow was on point, an u barely worded antyhin incorrectly, on the whole everythin was strong in the peice...keep 'em comin fam, Peace. |
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i wouldnt expect sum 1 as wack as u to understand anything written in this verse. so i forgive your idiotic ignorance |
pretty dope ass vocabulary,very nice structure,very nice everything,keep it up man
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thanx fam... new joint coming today
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