evil vs deE
 

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Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 04-23-05 at 11:11 PM

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evil has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-23-05 10:41 PM.

DeE has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-23-05 10:43 PM.

im lyricly killing this MC who think he can rap better than me
Hes wack as fuck especially with a name like deE
Im ripping faster than a Ak-47 hitting your chest
So you can’t rap no more cause your put to rest
………….Slam you like a wrestler shit you’re a girl so I mean chyna
Think your tight? You wouldn’t be tight if you were a virgin vagina
Thinking your funny thinking you could hack.
Man dave chappele even thinks your wack
So Let me brush those shoulders off they look kind of muddy
how the hell am I supposed to drop personals on this nobody

iight les go....

Yo, fuck all the glamours and glitz, I plan to get rich
I’m from new york and never was a fan of the knicks//

I used to hustle, sellin blow in the park
Countin g stacks and rockin ice that glow in the dark//

I fuck around and throw three in your chest and flee to my rest
I’m, older and smarter this is me at my best//

I got more riches than you, fuck more bitches than you
Only thing I haven’t got is more stitches than you//

how u gone call ur self evil
wen da craziest shyt u eva done wuz play evil knievel//

Fuckin punk, you ain’t a leader, no one eva followed you
You was never shit, your mother shoulda swallowed you//

And if you think I can’t fuck with whoever, put your money up
Put your jewels up, no fuck it put your honey up//

Before I buck lead, and make a lot of blood shed
Turn your tux red, I’m far from broke, got enough bread
And mad hoes, ask beavis I get nuttin butt-head//

Got em all day evry day

c'mon pplz uppin 4 dis shyt les go........givin baq honest votes afta i hit 20 posts

This was feedback posted for DeE
 

pollz..................

Voted For: evil

uhhh, this easily goes to evil, he threw a punch, didn't self-glorify his whole verse....he actually came pretty hard with decent shit....dee, you gotta get the basics of a punch man, no one cares in you're older or that you dislike the knicks,,,,,,,diss him yo

v/evil.....for actually dissin the other guy/harder punches......rtf

upppin 4 votes

come on people plz dont sleep on this

This was feedback posted for DeE
 

Punches-Dee...got sum slick punches
Multis-Dee...sum sick ass wordplay
Vocab-Both...the usage was simple
Structue-Dee...easier to read,Evil more spaceage between lines would be better

vote-Dee....lopsided battle,honestly Dee had it da whole way thru

this is just feedback....i can't vote without 50 post

Voted For: evil

vtin for evil

evil had harder punces n more creative metas

evil
good punches nice n hard, creative, well delivered
ya personals really didnt see any get some of those in ya verse
flow was good and ya strucutre was nice as well
didnt see any multies get thos ein ya verse as well
ya had some creative metas, very nice and hard, creative

ya had good wordplay n basic vocab skills but overall a nice drop

dee
came a bit original ya punches wernt as hard as they should have been, ya personals well i really didnt see any personals that would cathc my eye ya wordpkay was very basic ya flow n strucutre waas ight both easy to keep with but ya lacked the punches and personals
didnt see any multies so elevate ya game

both need to elevate on harder punches, multies, personals

my fav line:
………….Slam you like a wrestler shit you’re a girl so I mean chyna
Think your tight? You wouldn’t be tight if you were a virgin vagina
(line by Evil, my fav line out of bothya verses)

evil gets this due to better metas and punches

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This was feedback posted for DeE
 

that line"I got more riches than you, fuck more bitches than you
Only thing I haven’t got is more stitches than you//"
^^^bitin!!!!!....4 real^^^^
check big L 98'freestyle..heres proof

Voted For: evil

evil - Good spit, punches were hitten hard, and it flowed pretty decently.

Best Line - So Let me brush those shoulders off they look kind of muddy
how the hell am I supposed to drop personals on this nobody

Worst Line - ………….Slam you like a wrestler shit you’re a girl so I mean chyna
Think your tight? You wouldn’t be tight if you were a virgin vagina

DeE - Good spit man, no real punches, but it flowed well.

Best Line - Before I buck lead, and make a lot of blood shed
Turn your tux red, I’m far from broke, got enough bread
And mad hoes, ask beavis I get nuttin butt-head//

Worst Line - fuck around and throw three in your chest and flee to my rest
I’m, older and smarter this is me at my best//

OVERALL - one sided battle here, evil is the only one that tried to throw a punch. He had an iight flow, DeE you had some good rhymes, but this is a rap battle, not freestyle session.

Vote - Evil