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Feel it in the air (remix)
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"I can feel it in the air........ I can hear it in your voice.... Its something wrong here, something goin on here I know something's up cuz i can feel it (in the air) <<girl sings i can feel em surroundin me, and hounding me blockin me, got 2 glocks where my phone is 'pose 2 be guess thats da thug in me...even this way around my boys dey sayin "damn man you changed, cuz i can...(hear it in ur voice)"<girl sings i'm over whelmed by this deep incredible force i'm pass grown guess its time for me 2 make a choice hear my voice, i ain't never sounded like this got me scared 2 walk down da hall just 2 take a piss fuck a schitz, its just my intuition that i feel like this niggas call me crazy but i just don't care say all u want but nigga i can feel dis shit in the air Chorus] "I can feel it in the air........ I can hear it in your voice.... Niggas out 2 get me, i can feel that shit its tru stopped walkin wit 1 chip and stepped up to 2 time 2 move, cuz i can feel 'em hot on my tracks ain't got no real niggas dat will watch my back hold my stacks, well back i'm out on da streets only one i do trust is my tru friend i call heat only use it 2 cease a mothafuckin heart beat creep (pause), keep my paste up, neva slow up shit, a nigga still runnin after da feds showed up keepin da hustlin up...gotta check my self- conscience people crazy these days, they'll do anything but da obvious i know dey want me but i ain't goin no where let my bullets do da talkin let em spit (in the air)<< girl sings Chorus] "I can feel it in the air........ I can hear it in your voice.... |
nice shit ma........feelin da stucture n use of imagery........flow was good also........7/10
keep at it ma, stay up |
dats whats up...uppin....give me ya feedback....thanks
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good drop....iunno wether i like your version better or mine...peep it if u want 2 i'll drop tha link or somethin but anyway ya structure was a real strong point but it fell off in just a few places.....i really like tha way u blended tha girl that sings in with ya verses 2......stay up & rtf....1
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thanx... yeah post it if u can....dats whats up!
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yo....this was okay..not really feelin it too much..no hate...the hook was really really basic along with the rhymes alot didnt really flow good together and really basic..but keep it up u be fettin better...no beef, just not feelin it..but keep it up anywayz
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no beef takin papi... you got yo on say and opinion... thats wat i asked for so aint no beef fa reall thanks for stoppin by
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iight ma i gota give mad props...that was real...keep it up and lets sho waht femcees bout. 7/10
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^^^^ damn you went and got my old shit lol ty ma |
Thank You.............
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anotha heater right here 4 my babygirl "Ms Booty" i luv reading ya writings cuz u neva let me down keep writing alot of imagery, metas, multi'z, vocab, & overall nice piece
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