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I Am.
I am not what you see but what I am underneath and what I am tommorrow Gods Image Personified, seeing what is there & what is not to the eye for there is more For I am many things that to me, the eye of the beholder, could not utter or express I am... Malcom X's Voice, My sure presence radiates throughout any room i lay present Powerful, I am, turning heads and opening eyes and ears with a definitive outlook I am... David with a stone & a sling shot, Precision unmatched against all odds & coming out on top victorious Powerful, I am, My courage unmatced...Sure resilliance agasint hate for my mind is the stone I am... Virgin Marys Abortion, What couldve been in present time or past or even what could be, the future Powerful, I am, A decision to take away what god has given forth right...the power to be I am... Martin Luther Kings Dream, The ultimat of all imagination the ultimate prayer & cry out, Unity Powerful, I am, The dream is a living proof of gods undoubted power, for it the dream answered in time I am... Hitler's Propoganda, The evil of all doings..one of the ultimate voices, almost making U believe the sky is orange Powerful, I am, The power to steer ones mind to believe & live out in our own image I AM... My own self unmatched, unduplicated & POWERFUL I AM... Inspiration to ones that need it and too minds that are Full to expand I AM... GODS STRENGTH & IMAGE, All his pain suffering that has built strength in me and carried through my soul I am Powerful, my mind, body & soul as i carry it out everyday through... My Presence, My inspiration, My vision, My Dream & my thoughts Powerful, I am, Like gods image for he built us in his image for I AM here to carry it out |
haha, roarrrr....nice piece man, in-indepth and well wrtitten and thought out, you raise some great points in this one, this reminds me of a revolution type piece, great job on this..keep dropping.1
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yup agree wit that ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
its hella good lol really insightful |
well, I never seen a line up like this one.. wow.. I like this one.. very thought out..
keep em' comin'.. sweft |
shit, this was some deep ass thought......well worded too, wow, great stuff, i liked the ideas and how you explained them so vivdly, just making you think about it after every one....this could be a real inspiring poem for some and it was put together very well, especailly the end.....you better keep up.......and i know you wanna be an OG :cool:.....hit us up....pz
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man thats some dope shit dude, really good, the repitition worked out very well, wierdly done, but thats good, cuz it was very original.. a really like this, one of the better pieces i've read, rtf on Distorted World in this forum
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