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honestly, this is more then simple...its bad
get creative with ya drops in here, cuz
ya lines are too short, ya vocab is weak,
ya direction needs a topic..."niggaz aint needed here"
i dunno, try the cypher but stop droppin in this forum
cuz its not worth rating a couple bars............
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here ill break it down for ya
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It ain't safe when I'm in a liquor store
Niggaz on the block r illest than before
^^fucked flow, barely have a point outta ya whole bar
everything happens when we turn off the light
grab a bottle, a knife and ready to fight
^^lol, shit, stop cutting yaself n start dissin others creativly
brake the bottle in my nose I'll cut yo wrist
I'm a crazy nigga, I'm a fuckin beast
^^forced ryhme, not koo at all
Not so good with rappin keystyle
maybe a lil betta when I do freestyle
^what the fuck are you sayin...no, dont diss taself in ya own shit"leave it to others"
Its hard wehn your enmies see you holdin their girls hand
so then is another liquor store battle, I lose half of my band
^^meh, not bad but it has no meaning along with the
other bars, but line length was ya only good thing
niggaz waek my niggaz then me
but niggaz just don't know who I be
^^pleaze...are you 5 years old??...com'on...
that's my only point of explanation
of what I feel when I kill.... sweet Sensation
^^utter bullshit........
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overall srry but this is the worst ive seen in this forum
in the last 24 months, shits soooooocrazy stupid..go elevate,.......no hate