morse code vs BLACK~MAGIK
 

Battle Rules:

10- Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


TJ VS O.G.

Minimum posts to vote: 300

Check in by: 04-29-05 at 01:04 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

morse code has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-26-05 02:40 PM.

BLACK~MAGIK has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-26-05 02:42 PM.

Yo...

This kid is weak........you 6-0? shit, watch me end his streak
Try and stop me, get thrown "in a box" like "hockey penalties"
I'll cave your face in, and if you doubt my game's amazing
I'll fuckin' "eat you dogg"............. but I "aint no asian" *
You schoolin' this vet, won't happen like you rulin' at text
How you hard when you're 14 and haven't hit puberty yet? **
This fag is nothin, real emcees can see past his bluffin'
And he's 6-0, because he calls my home, and asks for punches***
Just face it, you're weak kid, I'll leave your face in the cement
.........This fake "couldn't be sick" if he caught "fatal diseases"





Explanations:

Since I know Morse Code in real life, most of my punches were personals

* He is asian...Some asian people eat dogs

** He's 14 and real short and hasnt really sprung yet (lol, sry dawg)

*** He called my house askin me to give him punchlines for alot of his battles (not all of them)

No hate man...just a battle...

wutever skill level you at, im two times better that
ya reppin the arch, then im the m on a mickey dees bag
even if my punches were average, you'd be that little orange fish *1
ill throw rocks at your house, and leave your door witta sore-henge
your a chicken AND a fag....you stay fighting with them cocks
have you hiding behind the counter, like viagra, in children shops
im owning this ho, like putting a sold, sign on a golf course
remember microcker, he had the same DNA as yours
im constantly stealing your spotlight, like flashlight thieves
matter fact, it left you in the black, magik,vanish pleeze

1*nemo

if you dont get the punches please do not vote

Nice verse man...May the best man win...Good shit...uppin for votes...

^coodnt of said it better.....
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uppin..........

This was feedback posted for morse code
 

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Voted For: morse code

wutever skill level you at, im two times better that
ya reppin the arch, then im the m on a mickey dees bag
5...ok honest shit....this was a weak opener!!!!
even if my punches were average, you'd be that little orange fish *1
ill throw rocks at your house, and leave your door witta sore-henge
6...better but that nemo line was gay!!
your a chicken AND a fag....you stay fighting with them cocks
have you hiding behind the counter, like viagra, in children shops
7...nice shit, gud meta and shit!!
im owning this ho, like putting a sold, sign on a golf course
remember microcker, he had the same DNA as yours
7...lol!!! gud line!!
im constantly stealing your spotlight, like flashlight thieves
matter fact, it left you in the black, magik,vanish pleeze
7...nice personal on his name!!

OVERALL: 32/50


This kid is weak........you 6-0? shit, watch me end his streak
Try and stop me, get thrown "in a box" like "hockey penalties"
5...ok meta, 1st line was played filler!!
I'll cave your face in, and if you doubt my game's amazing
I'll fuckin' "eat you dogg"............. but I "aint no asian" *
7...LMAO!!! asian shit was funny!! kinda racist tho!!
You schoolin' this vet, won't happen like you rulin' at text
How you hard when you're 14 and haven't hit puberty yet? **
7...LoL!!! more funny shit, 2nd line was dope!!
This fag is nothin, real emcees can see past his bluffin'
And he's 6-0, because he calls my home, and asks for punches***
6...aight punch, droppin off from previous two!!
Just face it, you're weak kid, I'll leave your face in the cement
.........This fake "couldn't be sick" if he caught "fatal diseases"
6...played shit but u didnt do it too gay!!

OVERALL: 31/50

Close battle!!! I found it hard to break the two apart but in the end Black Magik dropped a couple of played lines, one of which was just played filler..........morse code just had a slightly better tally of punches, but ya need to stop explainin shit and drop the speechmarks and bold and italics shit!!!!

V/ - morse code

RTF!!!! link is in my siggy!!!!

This was feedback posted for morse code
 

jus peepin' polls. Nice battle by both. pc.......................

Weerd...uppin...

This was feedback posted for BLACK~MAGIK
 

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Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK

Magik takes this battle... The punches were understandable and hard... The structure could be better... For example minimize the .............. and get straight to the point... another thing is your vocab... it isnt bad, but it does need to be uped... this isnt your best battle by far, lol... no hate... Now morse code... your shit was aight... I wasnt really feeling what you had to say... your vocab was aight, your punches were kinda wack here and there, no hate... your structure was off as well... so Magik takes this...

weerd...thanx for the vote...Uppin this shit...