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50Cal. 04-26-05 11:08 PM

dramaqueen vs c.a.l.i
 
Check In By friday Or Topic Wont Be Given Poems Due By sunday NITE 12 PM EASTERN TIME. Edit You Link With At Least 2 Other Poetry Battles In The League You Voted On Voting Ends At 12 Eastern TimeON tuesday NITE NEXT WEEK.no Line Length And Dont Write A Topical. This Is A Poetry League I Will Dq You If You Write A Fucking Topical I Hate That Shit Its Not Poetry!!Gotta Actually Win Good Luck To BotH
VISIONS OF THE EARTH, enjoy

^^..^^ 04-27-05 02:05 AM

Check............................................. ........

DQ 04-27-05 08:00 AM

Dopeness...checkity check check...

DQ

Giving An Extension Until Modayp

Elementality 05-02-05 12:58 PM

wow to know one making the dead line but me and lyrical.... this is the most inactive thread ive seen.

DQ 05-02-05 01:50 PM

Visions On The Earth



Vehement deluges of rain streaming down from heaven’s gates
Precluding me from getting lost in careless, peaceful slumber
Yet I feel truly blessed for the fertile offspring the water creates
Even though forests are being destroyed and turned into lumber
Trees I used to climb in as if I overcame my biggest enemy
Are now being crushed like a little fly within my hand palms
How is it possible when the consequence is easy to foresee?
For we became more detrimental than all those nuclear bombs

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A gentle, warm summer breeze exploring my smooth skin
So freely running into the open field of fresh golden wheat
Harmonious rustling of leaves as if someone playing the violin
Until the urbanization invaded and covered nature with concrete
Soon enough followed the cars filled with intoxicating gasses
That surround our Mother Earth with a smog, oh so blinding
Corrupting mental state, materialism appeals to the masses
Egoism used as tight chains, so uncomfortably binding

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As I gaze into my innocent child’s deep blue, seeking eyes
Wonder what he will grow up to witness in this depraved society
Listening to gorgeous cosmos would’ve prevented our demise
But my son will learn on his own, won’t teach him anxiety
For there is still so much beauty in this world to discover
Such as a winter wonderland, pure lakes and moist sand
Although cruel wars circulate, I long for him to be a lover
All I want is for him to enjoy for darkness he can withstand

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DQ

^^..^^ 05-02-05 11:05 PM

you dropped after the time i aint drop we close it i quit this for now...................

Acuity 05-03-05 01:12 PM

^therefore you loose and ur record is now 11-1 :thumbup:

DQ 05-03-05 01:15 PM

I got an extension till Monday so I did drop in time, I sent pm to all three mods and Stanza edited my check-in.


So I didn't drop after time...

Ill-Grammatix 05-03-05 04:13 PM

damn... hot drop...

DQ 05-03-05 04:18 PM

Thanks but I don't know whether I won this or not, I'm confused lolz...someone please clarify this because I did indeed get an extension :)

^^..^^ 05-04-05 04:21 AM

im making acuity mod i really have no time for this ma true story.........................

Acuity 05-05-05 01:22 PM

Drama Queen wins-CALI failed to drop.

AC & Elem


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