dramaqueen vs c.a.l.i
Check In By friday Or Topic Wont Be Given Poems Due By sunday NITE 12 PM EASTERN TIME. Edit You Link With At Least 2 Other Poetry Battles In The League You Voted On Voting Ends At 12 Eastern TimeON tuesday NITE NEXT WEEK.no Line Length And Dont Write A Topical. This Is A Poetry League I Will Dq You If You Write A Fucking Topical I Hate That Shit Its Not Poetry!!Gotta Actually Win Good Luck To BotH
VISIONS OF THE EARTH, enjoy |
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Dopeness...checkity check check...
DQ Giving An Extension Until Modayp |
wow to know one making the dead line but me and lyrical.... this is the most inactive thread ive seen.
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Visions On The Earth Vehement deluges of rain streaming down from heaven’s gates Precluding me from getting lost in careless, peaceful slumber Yet I feel truly blessed for the fertile offspring the water creates Even though forests are being destroyed and turned into lumber Trees I used to climb in as if I overcame my biggest enemy Are now being crushed like a little fly within my hand palms How is it possible when the consequence is easy to foresee? For we became more detrimental than all those nuclear bombs . . . A gentle, warm summer breeze exploring my smooth skin So freely running into the open field of fresh golden wheat Harmonious rustling of leaves as if someone playing the violin Until the urbanization invaded and covered nature with concrete Soon enough followed the cars filled with intoxicating gasses That surround our Mother Earth with a smog, oh so blinding Corrupting mental state, materialism appeals to the masses Egoism used as tight chains, so uncomfortably binding . . . As I gaze into my innocent child’s deep blue, seeking eyes Wonder what he will grow up to witness in this depraved society Listening to gorgeous cosmos would’ve prevented our demise But my son will learn on his own, won’t teach him anxiety For there is still so much beauty in this world to discover Such as a winter wonderland, pure lakes and moist sand Although cruel wars circulate, I long for him to be a lover All I want is for him to enjoy for darkness he can withstand . . . DQ |
you dropped after the time i aint drop we close it i quit this for now...................
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^therefore you loose and ur record is now 11-1 :thumbup:
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I got an extension till Monday so I did drop in time, I sent pm to all three mods and Stanza edited my check-in.
So I didn't drop after time... |
damn... hot drop...
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Thanks but I don't know whether I won this or not, I'm confused lolz...someone please clarify this because I did indeed get an extension :)
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im making acuity mod i really have no time for this ma true story.........................
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Drama Queen wins-CALI failed to drop.
AC & Elem |
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