Take 3, Im lookin for ratings as well
 

Free agent take(3)

I gotta CaL. with a 40 Bus./Shell, when the 40 cuts/Hell, when the shorties run/ Don't it's a homie's trust/You wanna beat me?/You wanna teach me/Don't better speaking dyke language/Because you'll never eat me/I got a new exercise/Rick Simz kinda exercise/Stack pounds, but I don't eat pies/I drop the crack, but I smoke straight dymes/

(I want people to critize this piece)

Elevate and work on flow structure and punches....

-Correction-

I gotta CaL. with a 40 Bus./Shell, when the 40 cuts/Hell, when the shorties run/ Don't lie it's a homie's trust/You wanna beat me?/You wanna teach me/Don't bother speaking dyke language/Because you will never eat me/I got a new exercise/Rick Simz kinda exercise/Stack pounds, but I don't eat extra pies/I drop the crack, but I smoke straight dymes/