Read!!!!! A.x.
 

I don't need Light or cameras to start the action
am in advantage on you like the Tower level on Red Faction
I got the newest rhymez, you can call me Fashion
that's why you got a trailer n I got a mansion
Got the illest wordz, Got the deadly combination
I be killin weak n strong dowgs all around da nation
50 on X-Box, my face will be on play station
Ohhh it feels good, can u feel da sensation?
Ax is hot, ya'll gon be confusin me wit Rakim
It ain't my fault u suck and I'm so good rappin
many men, many many many men, wanna-be like me
Multi-planitum album and my ass on a DVD
I can make shit one day, but I make poetry the next
I ain't gon hear fo what u say till u compare to my text
Nice shit, nice spit, Big dick, Fight me
when u drop a verse, yo be rappin jus like me

(Hook)
Alive and Xtraordinary, Action and Xcitement
All around da world bitches tryin ta Xcite me
and I know........... (My men)
When this Street game finish ama play again

I posted it again cuz ya'll niggaz didn't send me feedback, I need ta improve my shit na' mean!!!

Feedback plz!!!!!!!

they gave you feedback, but it dont mean you listened
dont post the same thing twice, bones will most likely
close 1 of your threads now..actually both cuz you have no links
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read the rules that are sticky'd on this forum........
that way ya shit wont get deleted..............