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haha aiyo LFS, Armada, is it aight if i get at this nigga right quick mayne?Solid shit on that 2 easy track but look.........TONY, i got rhymes for days mayne u just dont understand.......comparin me to pac nigga? thank u bitch i appreciate it 2 bad i cant say tha same for u
*this nigga's got audacity no way LL's matchin me this shit' a wrap i'm murkin leavin all of LL hurtin........let's go* look....tony green dawg dont make me get at u i'd hate 2 be tha nigga to show u wut a gat do my guns click-clack too but nigga i just chose to use lyrics if i die tonight u'll still get murked by my spirit-fear it my lyrics, hear it and kid it's not a threat it's a promise u don't want .:fate:. to get demonic-you're HONEST(ly) incoherent..... with ya punch-lines, it's gun-time it's E.F. killin a coward nigga for fun- time (damn)i should be a reverend how i run-rhymes u got no talent but MY future's bright like a sun-shine ......get at me nigga TG really really want beef (riiiite?) TG gon keep it gully in da streets (riiiiiite?) TG runnin shit on RV(riiiiiite?) TG a lil bitch nigga(das riiiiite) TG really really want beef (riiiite?) TG gon keep it gully in da streets (riiiiiite?) TG runnin shit on RV(riiiiiite?) TG a lil bitch nigga(das riiiiite) is it me or does this text crossover cat humor me i mean damn i spit harder shit before i hit puberty i'll ruin the- intentions you had on elevatin ya shit i'll rip ya structure to shreds without hesitation ya bitch xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxA xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxB xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxC ^^get ya shit boxed in tight then you can get at me tony sent YOU to battle me, why? my shit's genius my record'll be 2-2 just like sex wit married swingers i'm sittin back watchin you niggas....prayin u flop it's ironic that tony's dissin me yet swearin i'm hot (check quote at bottom) TG really really want beef (riiiite?) TG gon keep it gully in da streets (riiiiiite?) TG runnin shit on RV(riiiiiite?) TG a lil bitch nigga(das riiiiite) TG really really want beef (riiiite?) TG gon keep it gully in da streets (riiiiiite?) TG runnin shit on RV(riiiiiite?) TG a lil bitch nigga(das riiiiite) Quote:
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=187640 same link as b4. i'll get u a new 1 real soon
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tight fam... was feelin this... good use of personals and wordplay specially the quote that ought to shut tony the fuck up lol nice one fam
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This was a pretty cool peice..
Structure was off, really need to try to match up your bars.. Use alittle more emotions , and try to use better vocab , and wordplay to create some imagery.. Overall this was an okay , peice, had some ncie bars , Pretty decent feeling.. Keep it up, and drop a link or this will be closed |
Damn...Fate...You wrong for this one man...lol...you straight killed him...Every line hit...Great personals and punches fam...right now Im lovin this shit...get at me man!
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Nothing I said was true that fake ass quote you are pathetic you are a fack pac wannabe you never held a gun you probably never seen a watergun you just a surburban ass nigga who think he gangsta cause he done a couple of gangsta movies and learned some 2pac lyrics this sucked struture was horrible matter fact I'm tired of you lets just battle and I'll prove you suck this gets a 0/10!
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werd kill this wack structured femcee
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aight bitch nigga lets go set it up. house rules. and oh yeah, them quotes aint real? lmfao....check da links bitch http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=185479 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=186415 |
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