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First Audio!! Please leave feed!!
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/b...ctionzmusic.htm
Me and **Ghoste** Did an anthem for our old crew NOK a long ass time ago...finally got around to putting it on the net...please leave some feed!! |
By the way, Ghoste has the first verse, I got the second...yall should be able to tell us apart...
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wow, took same lyrics pretty much and twisted them, same flow lol
lyrics are not good... but its ight i guess... 1st audio... 2nd, you had better lyrics and a diff flow than the orignal song, which is good. lyrics still arnt there, but they are better than 1st dude. Quality isnt good for both lol some played lines.. Overall... 5/10 |
Thanx for the feed...uppin
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aiight nice beat..vocals seem too loud in the mix man...too much echo in the vocals vocals got that dipset style seems like u copied his rhyme sceme style...delievery is aiight vocab could come up the vocals are overdriven in spot get a ....2nd emcee good delivery and voice and ok production get a de esser for the 2nd emcee roll off some of the high end on the treble
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Weerd...thanx alot for the honest feed man...uppin this shit...1
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i see ya finally dropped it, lol, ima leave feed as soon as i listen to it
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iight, yo, i felt like this song/beat is a good one to have your voices doubled too but you might have went a lil over board...i liked it though, however it prolly cooda been stronger, cant really judge the quality cuz i had to listen to it in low fi, lo....but anyway...1
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Thanx...uppin...
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ok you got a voice like g duece real nice and good ass flow here lines are decent punches on this you cant take this beat over cuz senser and d.i game owned this crazy hook is wack first kids wack black your pretty decent got a lil downsouth flow to you lyrically could come harder but decent drop here
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so, i didn't listen to the anthem...haha, too lazy, click on the first song
fresh voice man, word, diggin it.....this love song is pretty good man, nice lyrics....she must give good head :).....haha j/m, but seriously, drop more audio beach.....word OGs!!!!! keep up yo |
Weerd...thanx cali and kesse...Ima start postin more audio...So be on the look!! Thanx for the feed yall! Uppin this shit
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Uppin this shit...
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I thought this was well put together for a first audio. You got some potential. I think the only real thing you need to work on is your lyrics.....they were pretty general. Try to diversify yourselves.
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