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Germ 04-29-05 06:43 PM

Calm vs Diman
 
Battle Rules:

20-30 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No D/R
No Hate
No F'in Bullshit

Crew Battle: TC vs OG

Topical Battle: Lost in a Dream

gl....3 days to check, 2 to drop

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 05-02-05 at 06:43 PM

Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in.

System 05-02-05 12:56 PM

Calm has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-02-05 12:56 PM.

System 05-02-05 02:35 PM

diman has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-02-05 02:35 PM.

Calm 05-04-05 10:58 AM

Ayo I'm in class right now and i cant post my verse until about 4 or 5 my verse is done I just wont be home until then to post it

Calm 05-04-05 11:53 AM

this is just a post so i wont be DQ'd my verse is ready. but i'm at school and wont be home until 4-5 due to Finals for my AFrican American studies and Sociology courses. will edit with verse

Calm 05-04-05 01:46 PM

for sum reason i cant edit my posts above so here's my verse

wild dummin, lemme find a phone and dial something
Call up Quest to find Maps to stop my reckless mile running//
B4 he could tell me the smile fronting Style’s coming
I look around the booth to find I’m surrounded by vile humming //
I’m now gunning, sum how running at light speed
Passing the corner of Sleep hoping Awake will find me//
It’ll be hard cuz the sights seen are of a riots inciting
I mean often I visit the city of Dream but tonight is frightening //
Lightning flowing from clouds in bright streams
Sight beams followed by Pows! And high screams//
So I veer , past the cats a lot of you dogs fear,
To map legend with thousand dots all saying “you are here”//
But what is clear is everywhere is nowhere at the same time
So I walk like tossing clocks into garbage to waste mine//
Dodging mis-steered vans which litters a trail of beer cans
Eyes hear so many horns you’d think it was deer land//
Hit the rocks fast when I’m ducking while shots blast
Hooker transactions, only time I’m seeing one “Cop Ass”//
Stop fast, mouth grasped as seen malign causes
Clocks gasp yet mine gags at the thought of time pausing//
Now I’m launching feet across the floor’s blocks
Towards an exit sign only to find the door’s blocked//
So I force rocks and boulders out of my path
Arms up, palms out, push just gotta follow my hands//
what hollowed my plans was the brick wall w/ no door
spun 360 degrees to notice I’m surrounded by four more//
stuck with a “Ring” like the “Hobits in Mordor”
so I begin digging within like searching for core ores//
somehow I’m suddenly brought in to town
the City of Dream where I’m lost but hope to be found//


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