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l i n e . vs Golden Dayz
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20-30 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No D/R No Hate No F'in Bullshit Crew Battle: TC vs OG Topical Battle: Fragments of Life gl....3 days to check, 2 to drop Minimum posts to vote: 200 Check in by: 05-02-05 at 06:44 PM Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in. Expired, old battle close |
l i n e . has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-29-05 11:29 PM.
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Golden Dayz has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-01-05 11:18 AM.
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Fragments of Life
Day one: First trimester (infant) Laying with thousands of pillows protecting my dreams On the soft music scene, but nothings what it seems I kick at the seams, and a hand rubs me on the head Someone said I'll be great, but I'd just prefer to be fed Recieving much needed nutrients, always absorbing vitamins Feeling so impressionable, soon to be doing what mommy did Soon I will open my eyes and realize what's going on When mommy lights up that bong, Ill be growing up wrong.. Second Trimester (childhood) Toxins poison me but It seems as though I can't get enough Seems like I can control my cravings but mommy's fucked up Im starting to give up, my world's caving in like gold mines People forget the potential, inside my diamond mind They begin to cry inside, questioning my very existence Consisting of drugs and abuse..god how I'm missing it I wish it goodbye but my attempted suicide gets thwarted The cord couldn't hold it, God I wish I'd just get aborted.. Final Day, Third Trimester (adulthood) This cell entitled Earth... is enough to make any man insane The pressure of a pulse on my skull begins to puncture my brain Breaking free of these chains, I fight battles until victorious My parents must have noticed, that I'm not a contortionist I'm a grim guy, firm regarding every move that I make But the more problems I cause, leads to more action god takes He continues to poison me, I'm honestly a deformed fuck And if I ever make it out of prison... I'll scorn luck. ... A light at the end of the tunnel, gives action to make Is this a birth or a fate... Either one of them I'll take. Life is great, but too much of a good thing brings death to bloom It's been like this since I been on my own, and been in the womb. |
Life speeds up to the distance untraveled,
Letting the questions of life be unraveled. Trees and grass green with life around them, I sound them with music to lengthen my life within them. Fast and furious everything is blurry to the sides, Why do people have to try and make people cry. Upcoming life like a train, smoking and uncontrollable, Heart beats faster as this becomes intollerable. Questionable living and doubting chances, Take these dances as a chance to relax in this. Road block upcoming and heart is too rapid, My strength flies out but am unable to catch it. A shock wave of glass and and blood spills to the dirt, Hurt as it is it knows it can withstand much worse. Inside waves high and low, changing in an instance, What was that that passed me by? I must have missed it. Lying on the ground with no movement or stirrance, Everyday I have to experience this occurance. These pieces of life reform, but shatter daily, I cry out to the heavens but no one wants to save me. Alone and cold until this window forms again, To bar me away from the people I call family and friends. Old men and women and young boys and girls, This is my life inside the broken life fragments of the world. |
Good luck bro, I thought I had till tonight to write it.
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