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L. Veracity 04-29-05 08:36 PM

Leave It All Behind For You (with Lord Have Mercy)
 
--[L. VERACITY MUSIC]--

this is a track me and my boi LHM did recently...hopefully ya'll like, my quality could be better but aye, none of ya'll are offering to tell me how to EDIT better or buy me a better mic so don't complain, lmao...but I hope ya'll like this though :)...



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L. Veracity 05-01-05 01:06 AM

can't get no damn replies?...shit...

Dabatos 05-01-05 02:26 AM

listening......
the beats nice.. i recognize this beat but not sure from where.. i think its young gunners but not sure..

lyrics: the lyrics is nice.. and your flow is on point.. and yeah ur quality isn't the greateset but not the worst.. its just average.. or a lil higher then average..

Chorus: Its okay.. but makes sence

lyrics: is that a girl rappin in this second verse? lol.. well the flow is good still.. but seems like he's sorta talking.. but thats only a lil lol..

sorry not the best feed but im hella tired man.. lol

7/10

dimetapp 05-01-05 03:06 AM

.... i dunno... u a kid ? u sound young... aint sayin u aint got talent but how old is u

^^..^^ 05-01-05 07:10 AM

lord have mercy is already a rappers name i refuse to even listen now...........................damn biters...................................

Acuity 05-01-05 08:38 AM

^how do u know it aint the same guy? lol

listening...beat seems aight, not ma type of beat...the guy spittin sounds coo, kinda sounds like he shoutin, his flow is on beat, lyrically hes decen, his vocals cud b ever so slightly louder, quality is decent...veracity u come in nice..ur voice soudns a lil different in this track, ur vocals cud b a bit higher in volume, lyrically its pressty stndard but u spit it well and ur flow is on beat yo,ur quality aint as abd as u tink, outro is nice

8/10:thumbup: keep em comin girl

L. Veracity 05-01-05 10:18 AM

well first off I'm a female and I'm 22...C.A.L.I., I never heard of a LHM before him and he has a lot of other names but your listening is not needed, trust me...but thanx for UPing it though ;)...thanx Ac...

J. Luth 05-01-05 10:24 AM

ok, sorry it took me so long to RTF.

aiight, listenin'. beat coo. first verse. Nice flow. Like the voice. Good delivery here. Quality could be upped a bit, wit emotion. But overall pretty nice. likin' it. hook is pretty nice. Lyrics there for it. second verse nice too. nice voice, yo. Lyrics good too. haha likin' this so far. good emotion. Overall, nice track, yo. 8/10 pc one.

Tremendous 05-01-05 07:48 PM

Hahahah you tried to sound sexy ass fuck..and was..

lol at Dab saying this was Young Guns beat...It was Aliyah's or however you spell it..

I would've made this song better than then LHM...I wish i had a mic..My shits broken..f you wanna better mic ask phenom he got a nice one or ask Dalinkwent on HHF...

Here's my breakdown

LHM - nice flow voice aiight lyrics were cool straight forward....somtimes he said shit that was normal he didnt even tried to game in that shit but it was nice

LV - flow was on.....and you got my attention....lyrics were cool sounded like a down chick...ya quality needs to be better tho makes ya voice sound deep like Foxy Browns but ya shit was nice

L. Veracity 05-02-05 08:40 AM

thanx, 'preciate the feedback, and yes I know I need work on my quality and I've been getting different ways from different people to see which turns out best with my 20$ ass mic, lol...and I know Dalinkwent from H.H.F., his number somewhere in my damn phone, hahaa...he don't have a nice mic though, he just knows how to EDIT his vocals well, he use a 30$ mic and a sock as a pop filter, lmao...

M-Eazy 05-07-05 07:04 PM

listening now...

i think tha voice volume couldve been a lil louder. i ain't feeling tha beat choice. but tha flow is on, and the lyrics go pretty well with the song. i dont think this was that much of a good collab. i've heard better from you L. But this was just ight for me. nothing big. turn ya voice up ma!

6/10

L. Veracity 05-08-05 01:03 PM

thanx 4 the replies, UPing for s'more...

^^..^^ 05-09-05 03:50 AM

you never heard of lord have mercy?that sounds real suspect sinces hes on every busta rhymes album in flip mode squad and has 2 c.ds out:nono:

L. Veracity 05-09-05 08:51 AM

how does that make me suspect dumb FUCK?...when have I ever said that I listen to Busta Rhymes CDs, ion even know anybody with a Busta Rhymes CD, ROFL...not saying that he ain't good cuz he is and he's one of the most original people in the mainstream industry, but like I said, never heard of the dude in my life :D...

Murdah.txt 05-09-05 09:49 AM

good drop ma i like your voice flow is good lyrics r ight u sound fresh ma
volume is ight yer voice is a lil low but overall dope drop keep it up hit me up on msn if ya want to hear my audio werd mabe well collab i got lotsa shit out
keep reppin livin legendz ma peace


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