::..:$lobK::..: vs CA$per
 

Battle Rules:

10- Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

THE JURY VS LIVING LEGEND'Z

G-LUCK

Minimum posts to vote: 300

Check in by: 05-02-05 at 09:20 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

::..:$lobK::..: has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-01-05 02:27 AM.

CA$per has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-01-05 02:43 PM.

thing is this guys obese,he just adds a k at tha end....
either that or you find spellin to hard to comprehend.....
2 dayz to drop dogg,man u sure u aint illiterite....
u let me battle u and u great aha aint u consederate...
uh-oh hear comez tha expected,"dog your a friendly ghost"....
what tha fukk is this a contest,on who can say it tha most.....
dogg yer styles CRAMPED,u either a bitch or a fag…..
tha only time u “SHED BLOOD”is when u on yo monthly rag
This guys in tha jury, but guy is more like judge judy…..
Dogg u dreamin,get yo fam to kiss u sleepin beauty….

This was feedback posted for CA$per
 

Slobk: Okay your verse was cool. Most of your lines werent that great. You need to work on wording you meta's better and getting some witty punches. But you elevating so its all good. You had 2 bars that were decent. The flow was alright in yah verse. Just keep working at it.

Stupid Fag..Yo I Have Never Seen An Ignorant Fool This Bad!!!..
"Snype Ur Home" Away From U..So U Have "No Room" To Brag..
Push Me? Makin Me "Break A Tear" Is Da Only Way Ull "Move Me"..
U Don Get Pussy..Cuz Casper Only Gets Bitches In Movies!!!..

Vs.

Casper: Your verse was a smoother read without all those ' ' things around the words and shit. So thats a plus. Flow was good throughout. Punches were more direct than his and hit harder. Same amount of quotables but yours were better.

uh-oh hear comez tha expected,"dog your a friendly ghost"....
what tha fukk is this a contest,on who can say it tha most.....
thing is this guys obese,he just adds a k at tha end....
either that or you find spellin to hard to comprehend.....

v/ Ca$per

And yes i know i cant vote but please hit up the battle in my sig since I took time to read this and leave an honest vote/feedback

This was feedback posted for CA$per
 

just checkin the poll./............................

This was feedback posted for ::..:$lobK::..:
 

Aiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiight let get some votes..............

This was feedback posted for CA$per
 

Nice ass battle b/w bof yall
i like all tha punches n personals hit 4 bof yall
cant vote b/c of cru
but good battle
uppin dis 4 fam
uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp

It Was One-Sided..Casper U Suck Man..I Aint Even Try On This Battle Cus

This was feedback posted for ::..:$lobK::..:
 

Casper- Opener= Good personal..got the Yao reference..
2nd bar- OK meta...
3rd bar- Ha..
4th bar- Good personal..
5th bar- Eh, closer doesn't really matter...

Casper- OK opener
2nd bar, ok wordplay..
3rd bar- didnt advance the battle..
4th bar- really played
5th bar- personal was ok, but line was dull..

Just feeling the flow and metas on Slob's...personals weren't strained, they were actually pretty funny...Casper's was ok just some played lines and a few stalls that seemed like filler instead of punches...

Just honest feed since I can't vote..

My bad, first feed was for Slobz..............................

This was feedback posted for CA$per
 

checkin pollls.................................../

Yo can we plz get some votes........I'll the mista will return favor, word.

This was feedback posted for CA$per
 

polls i be checkin........................................... ...