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.:F.ate:. 04-29-05 11:40 PM

Tony Green vs .:F.ate:.
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 05-02-05 at 11:40 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 04-29-05 11:41 PM

.:F.ate:. has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-29-05 11:41 PM.

.:F.ate:. 04-30-05 12:44 AM

this wut u want nigga? u think u on my fuckin level lil ass cock barf dick in tha booty ass bitch?i cant even believe i’m doin this shit mayne. be real Tony u suck at life nigga God hates u.apologize 4 bein born. u should die now so we all get tha joy of pissin on ya grave. watch me murda this fuck ass nigga

I’m a beast my lyrics’ll eat u alive like u edible
my music’s impeccable envision me wreckin u
chin-checkin u deckin u with legible flow
leavin u unconscious on tha flo’ bitch nigga let’s go

^^ i’d slaughter him wit my damn warmup

i’ll lay a trigga town nigga down like tha maggot he is
slap him wit verbage, such herbage shouldn’t have any kids
ha….this hoe ass nigga’d sell his soul for my lyrical content
tony have a conscience and realize that beatin me is nonsense
ya punches couldn’t come close to hittin son, let alone hurt me
i could stop now and still end up 2-2 like a Tayshaun Prince jersey
u forever d/r E.F. hoe get off crew hopper we focused
fuck structure, even if slip off i’m right....back…. on before u notice
when i’m around u wont utter a peep if u feelin froggy then leap
matta fact fuck you send ya crew i’ll leave ya sheep dead in a heap
a little advice tone’ hang it up dawg quit rap ya effort is useless
meet up wit tha Q tha two of you can marry in Massachusetts



chea…..this nigga Phony Queen aint got shit on me.i aint even goin hard on him. Consider this a fuckin slap on tha wrist compared 2 wut I could do 2 u. I spit 24/7 bitch. in tha middle of tha night I spit nigga.in tha middle of tha night I spit, while u sleepin. Thas how u know I’m a fuckin nightmare in dis rap shit. U got no chance nigga. I’m done wit u…don’t say my name til u can get on some real shit mothafucka cuz u a damn bum…let this be a lesson 2 u. we out dis bitch.1.

System 04-30-05 08:23 AM

Tony Green has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-30-05 08:23 AM.

~Tony Green~ 04-30-05 09:09 AM

iight this bitch ass nigga want it be ready to go 1-3 check it, check it.............

.:F.ate:. the pac wannaba always talkin bout what a gun will do.*
I took OneStep out of E.F. and went 10 feet beyond you.*
But this beef is pointless lets not take it any farther.
So I'm just gone bomb one of Emerica's Finest like he was Pearl Harbor.
If you look at his aviator it says ready for whatever.
Paw Paw hear them shots you wasn't ready for that bereatta.
Nigga you's a Kid so stay playing with the Nets.**
Cause I'm gone sweep you 4-0 and move on to the next.**
No disrespect you doing what you doing just to get by.
"I said you was hot" so people call Tony Green a lie.
Livin' Legendz straight merk leave bitches in the dirt.
Your flowing is out of style like Fubu shirts.
.:F.ate:. loves men yes I will clear up the rumor.
Hes on my dick so much hes more annoying than a brain tumor.
Him and OSB is in the backseat secret lovers.
The closet he got to pussy is Lil Kim's "La Bella Mafia" album cover.
My punches hit you so hard its knocking tattoo's off ya.***
Couldn't "Snuggle" with a bitch if your ass was fabric softner.***
Post in your crew forum once and thats the most activity it ever gets.****
Blow your ass up in Dallas let you play with the Mavericks.****
This nigga bout to bite I know he pre-write.
Cause I'm posting before him and he accepted last night.

*******Closer******
I walk with a fist a.k.a the tooth losener.*****
And I carry black but it aint a album and it will let you meet Lucifer.*****

Explanations:
* He always talkin bout gunz and I left Emerica's Finest and OneStepBeyond is they co-leader.
**Jason Kidd play for the nets and the heat bout to sweep them 0-4 and move on to the next round.
***"Snuggle" is a Fabric Softner
****"Mavericks" are actually a wild Animal that stays on a range in Dallas.
*****Jay-z Black Album got a song named Lucifer

~Tony Green~ 04-30-05 09:14 AM

iight uppin fo votes .:F.ate:. should be a good battle!

distilled 04-30-05 10:11 AM

Voted For: Tony Green

This was probably the worst Battle I'v ever read.

You are both trying too hard to rhyme and forgetting what the battles are about, But Tony Green actually came with some punches, not tht good but they were there.

Fate, I could tell from the start this wasnt a battle verse, its not all about rhying, its about dissing the other person, and with no punches, you cant do that.

Both of you need to elevate a lot

p4ntzistheish 04-30-05 12:52 PM

This was feedback posted for .:F.ate:.
 
checkin the polls....hopefully this ends the petty shit lol...plus it counts as a crew battle lol...two birds...one verse lol

.LeFt. 04-30-05 01:50 PM

This was feedback posted for .:F.ate:.
 
nice verse.... just checkin out the pollllsssssssss

M-Eazy 04-30-05 02:21 PM

This was feedback posted for .:F.ate:.
 
damn....stop writing stories. this battle guna be up forever now!

M-Eazy 04-30-05 02:22 PM

Do yo whole crew got loosing records? LMAO........

Kirk 04-30-05 04:36 PM

This was feedback posted for .:F.ate:.
 
meh............................................... .

~Tony Green~ 04-30-05 08:57 PM

iight uppin fo votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Tony Green~ 05-01-05 01:22 PM

uppin to the top come on yall vote so I can get my win!

Dirty Nigga 05-01-05 01:37 PM

Voted For: Tony Green

blah, i didnt really wanna vote cause tony is my boy an i thought it may be considerd DR
But i can assure you its not, i did plan on leaving feed

but fatez verse is screwed, the structure is horrible, the rhymes are non existant, the flow was not there, punchlines lacked...i just didnt like your verse at all FATE

Tony:
nice shit, well for the most part, few lines were weak as hell an didnt really hit hard ta be honest with ya, liked the closer tho, an that fabric softner had me like ''oooh'' for a second

vote/ Tony.

return the favor both of y'all or i will have the vote removed :D


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