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The Militant 04-30-05 02:36 AM

The Invincable-The Militant and Straight Aim
 
THE MILITANT'S VERSE IS IN BOLD
STRAIGHT AIM'S VERSE IS IN ITALLYICS

Im a general with alota experince...
I embody the title of a lyricist...
Words perfected i know u intersted...
I know u respect all the time i invested...
Into gettin shit wright gettin shit tight...
So if u fuck with me u wont live life...
Ill lose my calm ill let lose with emotion...
As soon as my pen hits the page its an explosin...
Ya feel my rage and dawg it aint metaphoricall...
Shit un-travled path is destined to be historical...
No one can dissperse a verse like me and straight aim...
Ya better welcome him back and if u dare to start hatein...
Ya'll have to fuck with me and u wont get the victory...
I wont stop hitin ya up till ya carrer is history...
Dissin the juggernautz bitch it aint startigically...
Go head say my name and ill respond imeditally...
Im the truest the one who'll influnce the revoultion...
Im ahead of man im the next stage of evoultion...
Can ya catch up mutha fucka can ya see clearlly...
That when i say die mutha fucka i mean it sincerlly...

1x(HOOK)
We rap fast enough ta be invisible
We suckerpunch all ya'll till u look miserable
Fuck tryin ta clap us we invincible
We break every rap principal
1x(HOOK)
im back to stretch that neck out like a giraffe
you frontin' when you say i'm wack and laugh
'cuz 5 minutes ago u' asked for my autograph
you not close too my flow, you not even half
shit you even wacker than some of the staff
u outta range u copyin me tryin 2 rap strange
i'm half of your age performin' like this a stage
releasing my rage & now i had a name change
i just changed my scene im no longer obscene
and i dont even think half of you remember me
even if i tried my best 2 jock ur fuckin memory
there'll never be a better me, nott this emcee
yeah that's rite dog im known by Straight Aim
im back now wit great game, im still the same
and i still gott the same flame....diffrent name
i was tired of being hated so i just hibernated
before i was overrated, now my names stated
love it or hate it i come ta be freshly debated
me and Militant came back here too invade it
me and Militant never become ta be hestitant
we been in shit, we spinning shit, we bringin it
we just constantly batteling & just winnin' shit
we spittin & droppin the illest shit like a lyricist
we bringin it like eminem's Infinite & we serious
rappin furious acting so delirious & just curious
u muthafuckas thought i quit but i still B in this

Mentor 04-30-05 02:38 AM

Straight Aim = Hood_dawg....i changed my name

The Militant 04-30-05 03:30 AM

uppin,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,

Mentor 04-30-05 04:39 PM

yo im uppin muthafuckas!!!

The Militant 04-30-05 11:22 PM

uppin mutha fuckas................................

The Militant 05-01-05 03:03 AM

fuck yall read this and leave feed mutha fuckas...

Mentor 05-02-05 05:46 PM

uppin for some serious feedback we'll return the favor or otherwise fuck it, if u muthafuckas dont give a damn then we dont give a fuck

Mentor 05-03-05 11:41 PM

im muthafuckin uppin muthafuckas be sleepin on our shit and if u fuckin ignore us any fuckin longer we'll fuckin merk all you muthafuckas out there muthafuckin bitches!!

The Militant 05-05-05 07:22 AM

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J.D 05-05-05 12:53 PM

yo nice drop you two, i was feelin this a lot. lyrics were effective and the structure worked for it. sum of it was slightly simplistic but it still worked.
best lines:
Can ya catch up mutha fucka can ya see clearlly...
That when i say die mutha fucka i mean it sincerlly...
hot closer from the militant.
i was tired of being hated so i just hibernated
before i was overrated, now my names stated
love it or hate it i come ta be freshly debated
me and Militant came back here too invade it
these were nice lines from straight aim.
overall-7.5/10

Ma$fit 05-05-05 01:17 PM

whoa...mil, ya verse had bad structure but i could still understand ya shit, nice...whats good wit u hood dawg?...oops, "staright aim"...lmao...u dun fucked round and elevated...nice structure...good shit from both...7/10, good collab

return tha fava...peep tha first link in sig...stay up

Mentor 05-05-05 04:22 PM

woa thanx yo good ta see some real feed in here without muthafuckas actin jealous..yo thanx i appreciate the feed i'll make sure ta return the fav...keep the feed flowin

Murdah.txt 05-05-05 04:56 PM

good overall drop liked tha hook and tha verses were good too a lil bit skecty on tha first verse but it was understandable good drop both yall ohh and x-cell u still hate me homie???

The Militant 05-06-05 12:59 AM

nah man i never hated u i was surronded with the beefin mentality so i was ready to go with war with any one hit me up well do a collab or somethin

Mentor 05-06-05 10:11 PM

pushin this shit higher...come on ya'll type some more feed


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