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Tstorm vs Shard
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10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting day to check... day to drop... G'luck Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 05-01-05 at 03:16 PM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. |
Shard has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-30-05 03:21 PM.
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Tstorm has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-01-05 04:05 AM.
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Yo this easy bitch cornered....... Like workin' a street whore
n' I must be salting some clouds how I'm murking a Tstorm* swerve n' just flee scorn.. you ain't have the heart to go far cuz the only heart you have... involve eatin' artichoke parts** ya cartiledge in nose broke.. kid watch doubt rush your cred sculpt more chips off ya face than a Mount Rushmore head you covet lead..as dildo pencils or a bullet lodged in ya brain dog shoppin at Old Navy is the only time you mallin' a name*** drunk insane or starved are bitches that like T.... dun's gay but he pop alot of cherries... when eatin' ice cream sundaes! * salting clouds makes it rain... but also plays out the force of a thunderstorm... ** artichoke hearts... *** Old navy found in shopping malls... wordplay used so also means Maulin a name... which is to do a name harm in some way... g/l holla. |
Set aside this lame,..new to rv, so a lot ta learn in this game
The only "sharpness" peeps will see in ya post is ya username* This guy reminds me of dusk..because he`s so far from bright If u turned up on stage in spandex,..you couldnt "come tight"** I mean,You try to drop bombs,but the crowd b booing all night Ive heard the phrase,but u bring a new meanin to "stage fright"*** If he woz royalty,...he wouldnt stand a chance of being valant coz posting first in this thread..only time u bin above my talent**** You need more than luck to win..but theres no four-leaf-clover No chance of improving ya interlect,....coz ya "schoolings over"***** dnt like to explain..but sum voters.lol *shard is a sharp piece of glass..ie his name **spandex is a tight fitting fabric ***hes so wack on stage its "frightfull" ****he posted first in the thread/above me. *****four leaf clover is a lucky charm..schoolin..lesson.yup |
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fucking vote.........................................
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Voted For: Tstorm
votin for Re Re got this due to way more creative punches and personals Re Punches- creative, hard hittin, very well delivered... nice Personals- lil basic not as hard but very creative.... nice flow- on the point, very easy to stay with.... nice strucutre- nice and easy to read, easy to stay wit... nice multies- didnt notice anyway... so elevtae on them some favorite line: You need more than luck to win..but theres no four-leaf-clover No chance of improving ya interlect,....coz ya "schoolings over"***** (nice way to close it off, nice punch as well) Shard Punches- a lil basic, some were hard others not, elevate on full hard punches threw ya whole verse nah punchline: ya cartiledge in nose broke.. kid watch doubt rush your cred sculpt more chips off ya face than a Mount Rushmore head (nah wasnt feelin it, weak, not impressing) Personals- basic, some hard some not once again, get stronger flow- good flow, nice strucutre- nice and even multies- didnt see any... elevate on those elevate on ya multies n get harder punches and personals both elevate on multies good battle fams vote goes to Re for harder punches and creative personals be sure to RTF battle link below sig |
Voted For: Tstorm
V/Re~verb.....this was a good battle...both came wit good verses...but verb gets my vote he came wit creative punchs werdplay personals an vocab also structure was on point.....Shard...u had a good verse too u had sum good punchs but a couple of played ones that throw off ur verse..i liked the closer it was good...but u need to work on the punchs ......No Hate..RETURN THE FAVOR........ Opener=R Closer=S punchs=R Personals=Tie Wordplay=R Vocab=R Multi's=Tie Structure=Tie Overall=Re~verb |
Voted For: Tstorm
mettas=t-storm punches=t-storm wordplay=shard creativity=t-storm overall=t-strom this was a one sided battle coz t was more consistent with his disses simple as that. Shard ya structure n flows good but ya forcing ya multies n the punches aint making much sense, sort that shit out n elevate a bit more.peace, return da vote http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=188270 |
Voted For: Tstorm
nice battle but reverb got this he was more creative with his he had nice wordplay and his funny punches mad me like good battle but reverb got this cus of punches |
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