Premanition vs Shard
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

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Shard has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-01-05 01:19 PM.

you lackin' ammunition Preman you on some Pre man shit
man if you take away this kid's facade..it'll just deman him
derailin' this cat so far...his bitch ass will never see mention
he has a train of thought... n' that shit has a steam engine!
your streak endin' cuz.. the only streak that i'm rueing for
is the bloody stains on my carpet when I'm through wit ya
who this chump? Seriously just confess you a loser bitch
kids askin "who Preman?"..are fuckin' questionin' evolution!
ya cred is loosened... if he considered the matter he'd fall
cred short like high schoolers applyin for masters degree jobs

was runnin short on time sorry no explas.... errything is self evident neways...



G'l




holla.

see this..........................................

see this man........ you runnin outta time...........

Premanition has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-02-05 10:57 AM.

Your verse more effective wen ‘mirror image’ reflected
Only shock you’d bring be if a punch of yours connected
Bitch them lines getting rejected like a faulty bar code
And you ain’t be’coming a custom’ like a dodgy car load
Sold ur soul to the devel but he turned down the exchange
Shard my ‘sole’ on ur level in a place where gravity reigns
Just ‘cavity’ chains cos them threats are ‘hollow’ n plain
Tie u down to my ‘lines’, only time ur ass on the ‘train’
Aka the ‘mirror’, ‘image’ broken as I watch your ass fall
Then ask you politely….’who is the greatest of them all?’
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Info for the death and dumb:-
- ‘mirror mirror on the wall who is the greatest of them all’ – quote for the film snow white but damn y’all know that surely…lol
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alright uppin the votes

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bring me higher..................... like bosses offerin jobs with blunts as benefits...

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Voted For: Premanition

vote gotz ta got to prem...consistant lines dat actually made since...

shard:
IP:


you lackin' ammunition Preman you on some Pre man shit
man if you take away this kid's facade..it'll just deman him
derailin' this cat so far...his bitch ass will never see mention
he has a train of thought... n' that shit has a steam engine!
^^i read dat and was like "damn!!!"...but afta this it was straight ass man...no hate but it wasnt doin much

prem:
Bitch them lines getting rejected like a faulty bar code
And you ain’t be’coming a custom’ like a dodgy car load
Sold ur soul to the devel but he turned down the exchange
Shard my ‘sole’ on ur level in a place where gravity reigns
^^now dats hotness right there...prem shit stayed still as far as delievery...simple

basically, shard, u gotta elevate tha same way i gotz too...ya verse against me was betta than dis...6/10 overall for u

prem...man dat was iight...i dont think dats ya best battle shit tho...sum shit could have been harder...still hot...8/10

struc-tie
vocab-prem
flow-prem
punches-prem
creativity-prem

overall: 7.5/10...iight battle

v-prem

RETURN THA FAVA...LINK IN SIG!!!

Voted For: Premanition

Vote: Premanition

Shard: ur opener was weak, there is better personals than tryin to create disses off his name that really didnt come off..ur 2nd bar didnt really diss him at all, cos i can c whta u were tryin 2 do but a steam engine is quick anyways, so in a way u givin him props..and the rest of your drop was weak, with no hard-hittin punches..

Premanition:your lines were original, creative and hard hittin, u played off his name wid dopeness, some nice personals, decent concepts n dat mirror on da wall shit was humourous...welcome back to text battlin punk, lol :thumbup:

RTF on ma battle wid Mad dog link in sig

hm... well In case you didn't notice I AM new here... I don't have indepth personals for dude so I had to resort to nameplays... And you misunderstood the train line... not speed... steam engines are outdated, thats the angle I was goin for that he have played/outdated concepts... but thanks for the vote neways...

2-0 Prem

uppppppppp

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