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Cri$$tyle 05-01-05 11:49 AM

Untitled diss
 
This kid aint ready for me like creatures God didnt put into a 'race',
i have this kid out of place- like tha 'lost city' and leave him finished like a closed case,
This kid couldnt match to my flow like bitches having tha wrong dates,
i have your body parts missing like shop lifting,
and have you served like chickens on 'Thankz giving',- i get 'thankz given' whenm your having spanks given-
laying dead like a gold fish with its tank missing,
my bullets leave your mouth open like 'french kissing'
and my shells reach you at any place like emails, and leave your ass more bloody than miss-carriaged females,

Alpha~Omega 05-01-05 11:54 AM

It was aiight....no hate, but the thing that threw me off was ur structure. Some parts werent effected by that the parts that were, threw off ur flow....other than that it was aiight...nuthin spectacular about about it....keep uppin doe.

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