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AutoMatik vs Daubs
Battle Rules:
6 Linez No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 05-02-05 at 03:33 PM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. |
yo i just realized....6 linez is too short..... lets do 8..... ight?
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Daubs has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-01-05 07:14 PM.
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6 keyed lines. Be quick........
So slow to make your spit...yet you claim your "AutoMatik" Shit you must be blind aswel as new...coz you cant read a line limit!! Say you not a newbie, then the symptoms must flash right past your eyes.. How can you have overcome it...........WHEN YOU still CAP RANDOM LINES!! And as for your "owned list", only got one person whos a downsydromed kid, Ya record aint even legit..........for the only win ya got...you cheated!! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ LOOK AT THIS BATTLE FOR PERSONALS/PUNCHES!! (was a 10 line limit and he took up 17!) oh and i jus realised he an alias...but whatever. |
AutoMatik has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-01-05 07:53 PM.
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My Lyrical Verbalness Be Putting you in Physical Tournquites...
I Murk A Bitch You Work Wit It Evaporate A Fagget Who Dont Deserve To Spit…. How The Hell You Gonna Test Me Fool? Grab The Gat Then Let It Go... Bullets In Ya Neck And Skull...Then Another One In Ya Chest And Soul.… Yeah You Know The Berretias Cold But Whats More Deadly Is My Best Of Flows... Now You In The Hospital For Haveing More Seamen In Ya Mouth Then In Ya Testicals!!!!(ouch) ^Owned...... |
yea nice man, i aint gonna hate on you or ssay shit so tell me your alias now!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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uppin for votes......................................
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Voted For: AutoMatik
My Lyrical Verbalness Be Putting you in Physical Tournquites... I Murk A Bitch You Work Wit It Evaporate A Fagget Who Dont Deserve To Spit…. 6/10...okay How The Hell You Gonna Test Me Fool? Grab The Gat Then Let It Go... Bullets In Ya Neck And Skull...Then Another One In Ya Chest And Soul.… 5/10....didnt see a punch Yeah You Know The Berretias Cold But Whats More Deadly Is My Best Of Flows... Now You In The Hospital For Haveing More Seamen In Ya Mouth Then In Ya Testicals!!!!(ouch) 8/10...lmao 19/30 So slow to make your spit...yet you claim your "AutoMatik" Shit you must be blind aswel as new...coz you cant read a line limit!! 6/10...decent Say you not a newbie, then the symptoms must flash right past your eyes.. How can you have overcome it...........WHEN YOU still CAP RANDOM LINES!! 4/10....wasnt felling it And as for your "owned list", only got one person whos a downsydromed kid, Ya record aint even legit..........for the only win ya got...you cheated!! 5/10...decent, but had a wack filler 15/30 this battle was pretty weak, both coodve came harder, daubs you had nice personals throughout, but had WAY to many fillers and your punches didnt hit hard enuff...automatik you shit had good multies and a nice closer, just try to use more punches, though the ones you did have were good, also work on your structure breakdown: opener-d closer-a punches-a werdplay-a personals-d multies-a structure-d v/automatik |
Voted For: AutoMatik
auto took dis he had betta punches hiz verse wasnt stretched he had betta vocab more creative punches n yea he jus came harder openor-auto betta punch punches-auto personals-auto wordplay-none vocab-auto creative-auto closer-auto auto get dis came harder wit hiz verse vote-automatik |
uppin for more votes..................................
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uppin for more votes..............................
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This was feedback posted for AutoMatik
Chaos man, you came mad weak :(. Hit harder next time :thumbup:.
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Voted For: AutoMatik
AutoMatik My Lyrical Verbalness Be Putting you in Physical Tournquites... I Murk A Bitch You Work Wit It Evaporate A Fagget Who Dont Deserve To Spit…. ^liking second line, first one's bleh How The Hell You Gonna Test Me Fool? Grab The Gat Then Let It Go... Bullets In Ya Neck And Skull...Then Another One In Ya Chest And Soul.… ^no real punch Yeah You Know The Berretias Cold But Whats More Deadly Is My Best Of Flows... Now You In The Hospital For Haveing More Seamen In Ya Mouth Then In Ya Testicals!!!!(ouch) ^hehe,lmao @ last line, first bit self-glorification though Good verse, had some nice punches and wordplay. Bit self-glorification here and there and no real personals but you made up for that by your creative wordplay and punches. Vocab was outstanding, had your flow on due to some multis and the structure was cool. Daubs So slow to make your spit...yet you claim your "AutoMatik" Shit you must be blind aswel as new...coz you cant read a line limit!! ^nice personal right here! Say you not a newbie, then the symptoms must flash right past your eyes.. How can you have overcome it...........WHEN YOU still CAP RANDOM LINES!! ^uhm, no real punch in my opinion, just not feeling it ya kno... And as for your "owned list", only got one person whos a downsydromed kid, Ya record aint even legit..........for the only win ya got...you cheated!! ^coo coo, bit played though Nice verse here as well, I especially liked your opener because it was a nicely worded personal that hit hard. Too bad you couldn't really stay consistent with those. Not exactly feeling the second bar, can't really explain it...I just don't see the punch and not too good wordplay either, it's so random. Then the last bar was cool but it has been used several times in fact, same as the retard-jokes. So maybe lacked bit of creativity but overall had nice personal, good punch in last. Structure was nice as well as flow, vocab was bit less compared to AutoMatik's. Vote goes to AutoMatik because I feel he got more creativity in his lines, no hate Daubs, you know I got nothin but respect for you but it was close battle... |
Voted For: AutoMatik
My Lyrical Verbalness Be Putting you in Physical Tournquites... I Murk A Bitch You Work Wit It Evaporate A Fagget Who Dont Deserve To Spit…. LOL NICE................. How The Hell You Gonna Test Me Fool? Grab The Gat Then Let It Go... Bullets In Ya Neck And Skull...Then Another One In Ya Chest And Soul.… TITE............. Yeah You Know The Berretias Cold But Whats More Deadly Is My Best Of Flows... Now You In The Hospital For Haveing More Seamen In Ya Mouth Then In Ya Testicals!!!!(ouch) SWEET FINSHER............ = 8/10 A REAL TITE VERSE DAWG U GOOD......... VS So slow to make your spit...yet you claim your "AutoMatik" Shit you must be blind aswel as new...coz you cant read a line limit!! BAD DAWG NOT MUCH DER................. Say you not a newbie, then the symptoms must flash right past your eyes.. How can you have overcome it...........WHEN YOU still CAP RANDOM LINES!! GOOD.................. And as for your "owned list", only got one person whos a downsydromed kid, Ya record aint even legit..........for the only win ya got...you cheated!! OK FINSHER =7.5/10 I VE ALOT BETTER FROM U, N UR PUNCHES WERNT DAT HARD............. BUT STILL A GOOD VERSE V/AutoMatik |
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