Elementality vs SexyChick1338
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-01-05 at 05:38 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Elementality has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-01-05 05:15 PM.

SexyChick1338 has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-01-05 05:18 PM.

Listen Bitch we all no u is a [B]Wigga,*
If U Don’t Know what that is Ur A White Man trying to be a N****,
U know that true, whats with the Name???,
Theres about 6 ppl on this site with that, your all the same!!!
This is my third battle, but I don’t say,
U verse is the same as a other punk said the other day,

Listen Dixon, I have something to say,
U’ve not got one friend, and u work in a kitchen, wearing a apron.
It’s all ragged, short like a dress,
Im sure ur mother wore it,
I said it’s a mess,
I laugh at people saying that, as there immature,**
Keep saying that shit, you’ll be gone like Mr. Shakur,
Don’t fuck wit this click,
Don’t make me spit,
U little bitch.

Ur always in the Singles Section,
Someat that u forget to mention,
Ur a leacher , that don’t give propz,
Stick doin that n someone will teach Ya,
Carn’t afford to Spend 3 Pounds on a song,
Wastes it instead smoking a bong***

Il spray ur ass wit a Tech-9,
The heart machine staying as a Flatline,
This means u now dead,
So leave it be,
Be Smart ,U carn’t mess wit me,
U Shud Be To Smart For That,
Otherwise the last noise u hear is blat, blat, blat, blat

I am take u to church to teach u a lesson,
Fuck u wigga I aint messin’,
U speak like u Know me,
Fuck u bitch u don’t know me,
Tryin’ to destroy me, that aint easy,
Go own spit a decent verse, try to tease me.

Beans Sed U’d better Get down or lay down,
It true u mess wit me u’ll forever stay down,
Hittin yo’ ass wit a K round
When Im finish wit u, ul be one of the lost and found
You won’t be alive, You’ll be dead,
Wit 6 bullet holes throughout your head,
I rob people like you every day,
Shitting them up by showing my K,
Me and my click love yellin’ city til’ we die,
It the truth i aint gonna lie,
We rep it, we Manchester’s Finest,
We after that skrilla you gonna deny us??

Im a be finished in three more barz,
Going to find you when we drive down your end in cars,
After this I expect no more disses,
From me to you, to you to me, what your doing I expect from sissies,
I love rap music but hate the haters,
Shut up with the diss talk save it for later.

Bitch you're about to get lyrically smacked out
This chix so fuckin horny she'd fuck a cub scout
I'm willing to bet this whores got shit prewrote *
Just bitching about how I gave her a soar throat
No doubt, So you're all about dancing so you say?
You couldnt shake your ass if it was judgement day
Wow, you're born in the 90's? That shits jus wrong
Went from wearing a tutu to rock'in a fuckin thong!
Your only 14 years old kid, quit workn the streets
Shes so young she still wakes up to wet bed sheets
This little tiney boppers just a whinney little slut
Can't sitt still till shes gettin her fix in the butt
Girl, you don't have enough skills to earn a dime
Thats ok though cuz all you know is nursery rhymes

* She said that it had to be "unlimited lines" so im willing to bet she took awhile making her drop including no personals whatsoever. The rest is pretty self-explan > just look at her profile.

Voted For: Elementality

obviously elementality

sexychick, you didn't throw a punch directed to him at all.....you made up half the shit, shit was whack whack whack....seriously, go read the tutorials, battles just aren't free raps, spittin shit about how you shoot people and rob them everyday......not one punch, well i guess if you count the made up ones.....probly about 2...word

element, meh, not bad, pretty basic, id say work on creativity and complexity....ya know....word, not bad though, you're comin along, keep up, but you took this fookin easily, merked the hoe.......haha, no offense/hate, but this is one sided

v/elementality....for, uh...punches

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Boosting .

vote no or for eveyr hold your piece................

This was feedback posted for SexyChick1338
 

Im not gonna vote cuz this was not even a battle it was like a story or a long answer ta a S.A.T question!!

E...had tha punchez but didnt really land at all!!
Sexy...Had a bunch of topical type things goin on..I was confused..so no vote from me just feed back!!
Holla atcha on tha up n up!!

hahahahah whaaat? Didnt land em at all?> whatchu mean ugene? I really dont know that you know what you're talking about holmes.

Voted For: Elementality

V/ Elementality

He actually had punches that were delivered well. Personals were cool. Her verse was shit lol. As long as that was there was nothing I liked. One-sided battle completely. Hit up the battle in my sig yo

Voted For: Elementality

SexyChix- Too many shit lines, cliche, not enough originality, no structure...you had some decent concepts, but instead of making them original, you just used played set-up and punches that were really too basic to be good. Work on the structure and how to clean up your punches.

OK line:
U know that true, whats with the Name???,
Theres about 6 ppl on this site with that, your all the same!!!

Elementality- OK, seems like you actually comprehended the fact that this was a battle and not Freestyling on Sesame Street...There was an actual structure to your shit and some ok punches, plus personals. All you need to win this one...
Best line:
Your only 14 years old kid, quit workn the streets
Shes so young she still wakes up to wet bed sheets

RTF, I need some votes if you can..

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Voted For: Elementality

ok sexy you best be pretty cuz sucking dicks the only way youll get a record deal that was horrible serious tructure is all over vocab is pre 1st grade your punches..........well you aint have no punches or personals for that matter too long bunch of bullshit looks prewrite still garbage as fuck written like a song instead of a battle verse which really annoyed me here shit is horrible in all aspects of battle rap your opener is horrible but your closers worse just trash here straight shit
-89643897484780143/10
anyways elementality good flow here nice vocab punches werent great at all but at least you had them personals were weak here as well flow was decent so for actually having punches and punches personals and disses being the heart of a battle and your oppenant having none your wack verse tops the garbage heap for the day with a whooping score of 1/10