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Calm vs EleGiaC
Battle Rules:
12 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No D/R No Hate No F'in Bullshit Crew Battle: TC vs OG gl...........3 days to check, 3 to drop Minimum posts to vote: 200 Check in by: 05-04-05 at 05:36 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. Closed - Expired / old battle win |
EleGiaC has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-01-05 07:40 PM.
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Calm has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-02-05 12:55 PM.
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Your verse with look worse than a girl trying to escape a date-rape-drug's-might..|
I was 'confused-about-parts' like a first born hermaphrodite..!!| Like a cat-defending-owners, I'll just be ready to pounce-and-cling..| Leave 'Calm' 'depressed-and-angry', like ya whole crew needs 'Family Counseling'..!!| Killin'-this-fake, grab ya neck, get ready to choke-and-own..| I'ma 'rock'-afella, I'll be pushin' you out like kidney-'stones'..| Calm will-be-history, touch me and you'll be-spun..| The murder of him is no-mistery, like a Scooby-Doo-re-run..!!| If clocks-had-age, you still couldn't wisely-use-your-time..| I'll shove ice cubes-up-ya-ass to send chills-down-ya-spine!!..| Slit-ya-open, and by 'blood-types' I didn't mean 'key-boards'..| 'Plus,' even if you was 'O-Positive' ya still couldn't make the crowd-roar!!..| Hmm...... |
When voters come in don’t ask if the feelin me
Cuz this nigga is garbage off hand like trash man deliveries// don’t stress cuz u not the best just spend more time wrestling geeks As of now u couldn’t be considered nice if u acted on Sesame Street// To get sick u shouldn’t dare me cuz it’ll leave El 4 ever wary, Bout his skills. in terms of Keys he’s lost touch like quadriplegic secretaries// My skill is more Far then Elegiac’s so Kesse I beg your Pardon, Y feed me him? I’ve had better lightweight meals at the Olive Garden// U should swallow ya pride and dont spit like proper Hoes from what I see ur game holds more holes than extra large soccer-goals// Add ya name to my list of wrecked opponents cuz even if you're #1 I'mma still be above you like an exponent// Taste of victory? I’m sipping it, cuz elegiac is no award recipient Fingers, voters are flippin him, no1 cares about him like 4th place Olyimpians// You don't know the half of illness while I do… Cuz On the skill Meter Elegiac comes up shorter than Haikus// Nobody sees that I’m blazin folks but change ya hopes Cuz in this battle I’mma upset Elegiac more than his AIDS results// This is my playground, I’ll smack you out the park like The Bambino U’re a no1 ya name only gets sumwhat repeated by stuttering Latinos// A win is something you’ll never see like hairless men with brushes Fuck your crew I’ll kill your support like the destruction of crutches// Put u in bags like ol’school lunches when I go berserk// Punches-n-bunches?couldn’t throw flurries food fighting w/ McDonalds desserts// |
This was feedback posted for EleGiaC
this was a good battle........but uh-oh calm, lol
it was actually 12 lines, not 12 bars, but its up to elegiac if he wants to get you dq'd.......but since almost every battle in this was crappily set up (i think this is the only one to go up)......would you like to set up the other ones? cause whats a crew battle when only one battle goes up |
This was feedback posted for Calm
checkin polls ....................................
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Wow you went over the line limmit...blah I guess uppin for votes even though you have twice as many lines...
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Naw nevermind Kesse set up a new topic and I'll post my 1st verse and Calm you post 12 lines because 24 to 12 isnt very fair...
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my bad.. i only saw the number 12... and didnt think it would be 12 lines. thats just bullshit for a battle. but my bad yo. i'm used to 10+ bar battles
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Its aight, I'll just tell Kesse to set up another one.
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if u want Kesse U can re-setup all the battles that were no-shows and I'll drop a verse or poem in everyone of them. i'll take up the spots of my crew members
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Voted For: Calm
votin for calm calm got this due to harder punches n a overall more creative verse calm punches- hard hittin n creative i like them mo then ele's personals- descent n hard hittin i liked em flow- on the dot with flow nice multies- didnt see any strucutre nice strucutre ele punches- nice but not as hard as calms fam elevate on harder punches personals- nice personals but get a lil more severe wit em flow- off n on threw me off ya verse a lil bit multies- didnt see many strucutre off n on man elevate on strucutre good battle fams calm get this i liked his punches n personals better then ele's good battle be sure to RTF link below sig |
This was feedback posted for Calm
calm gets the win for this one...i didnt like the other verse. but calms was good.
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Voted For: Calm
Your verse with look worse than a girl trying to escape a date-rape-drug's-might..| I was 'confused-about-parts' like a first born hermaphrodite..!!| —decent opener Like a cat-defending-owners, I'll just be ready to pounce-and-cling..| Leave 'Calm' 'depressed-and-angry', like ya whole crew needs 'Family Counseling'..!!| —nope.. Killin'-this-fake, grab ya neck, get ready to choke-and-own..| I'ma 'rock'-afella, I'll be pushin' you out like kidney-'stones'..| —decent Calm will-be-history, touch me and you'll be-spun..| The murder of him is no-mistery, like a Scooby-Doo-re-run..!!| —played If clocks-had-age, you still couldn't wisely-use-your-time..| I'll shove ice cubes-up-ya-ass to send chills-down-ya-spine!!..| —eh, this one was okay Slit-ya-open, and by 'blood-types' I didn't mean 'key-boards'..| 'Plus,' even if you was 'O-Positive' ya still couldn't make the crowd-roar!!..| —nah, not feeling this one When voters come in don’t ask if the feelin me Cuz this nigga is garbage off hand like trash man deliveries// —decent opener don’t stress cuz u not the best just spend more time wrestling geeks As of now u couldn’t be considered nice if u acted on Sesame Street// —weak To get sick u shouldn’t dare me cuz it’ll leave El 4 ever wary, Bout his skills. in terms of Keys he’s lost touch like quadriplegic secretaries// —don’t know what quadriplegic is, but this punch seemed okay My skill is more Far then Elegiac’s so Kesse I beg your Pardon, Y feed me him? I’ve had better lightweight meals at the Olive Garden// —okay, never heard this one b4, decent U should swallow ya pride and dont spit like proper Hoes from what I see ur game holds more holes than extra large soccer-goals// —nah Add ya name to my list of wrecked opponents cuz even if you're #1 I'mma still be above you like an exponent// —kinda weak closer [i]overall – both drops were not as hard as I thought it would be, but Calm took this one, just by a little bit, the punches from E was pretty wack & some of them was decent, E u need to elevate on those & add some personas up in there too.. .. ..& same goes to u too Calm… RTF Calm.. on my battle against Khaoz.. or this vote gets removed!! |
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