Verbal vs MaD_KnighT
 

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6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-01-05 at 07:16 PM

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Verbal has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-01-05 06:49 PM.

MaD_KnighT has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-01-05 06:50 PM.

Mad hails from the West, so I slap him in the east direction...
Cuz his pussy flows couldn't be sick if they developed a yeast infection..
Mad Knight? Yeah right..........this clown's a Jester, it's settled..
I'll rip up this fag's heart faster than high cholesterol levels...
Rapping's not your thing.....drop the mic and quit fakin...
Cuz you're an underground rapper....in terms of elevation..

Fuck me we all know dat ur rhymes are so unstable......
Now its time 2 break ur legs in 2 and turn da table.......
To break me is in-possible you wasting lifes pure n simple breath.....
Cuz meta's get sent to ya sooner than kids getting into oy chest!....
You suck on the mic, maybe literally coz we all no u suck dick.......
Get fucked quick cuz uve been in this prediciment once, give up kid

Cocky, cocky, cocky....good battle, let's see how those rhymes hold up...

2nd line :is ment 2 say toy chest..............pz

dont vote if u dont understand........

Ups, ups ups..............................................

Uppin dis joint...................................

This was feedback posted for MaD_KnighT
 

aight not bad drops

both cud use a lot of improvement
mad had a couple of nice metas in there....closer was weak though and verbal ya closer was about the only thing relatively decent.......sick lines are played like fuck

so i'd give it to Mad Knight........but i can't vote cuz we in crew!!!

Voted For: MaD_KnighT

vote mad

mad:came harder than verbal,nice punches,flow ok,whole structure good.....likethis line
You suck on the mic, maybe literally coz we all no u suck dick.......
Get fucked quick cuz uve been in this prediciment once, give up kid
....good punch,first line was hard...second good too....

verbal:nice flow,some good punches but not that hard.....best line.....
Mad hails from the West, so I slap him in the east direction...
Cuz his pussy flows couldn't be sick if they developed a yeast infection..
....good.....make me laught...lol....ur best line.....

vote mad for better stucture and harder punches.....keep spitting both....

Voted For: MaD_KnighT

ight imma break this down...

MaD_KnighT...

Fuck me we all know dat ur rhymes are so unstable......
Now its time 2 break ur legs in 2 and turn da table.......
^^ decent opener couldav been worded better 6/10
To break me is in-possible you wasting lifes pure n simple breath.....
Cuz meta's get sent to ya sooner than kids getting into oy chest!....
^^nice wordplay and decent creativity... 7/10
You suck on the mic, maybe literally coz we all no u suck dick.......
Get fucked quick cuz uve been in this prediciment once, give up kid
^^ decent closure goot meta 7/10

overall u had a solid verse but maybe you should try to word your punches better so they have more effect other than that its ight... 21/30

Verbal...

Mad hails from the West, so I slap him in the east direction...
Cuz his pussy flows couldn't be sick if they developed a yeast infection..
^^ good first line but i aint feelin the second line... 5/10
Mad Knight? Yeah right..........this clown's a Jester, it's settled..
I'll rip up this fag's heart faster than high cholesterol levels...
^^ decent punch here... 8/10
Rapping's not your thing.....drop the mic and quit fakin...
Cuz you're an underground rapper....in terms of elevation..
^^ bad closure bad rhyme and played concept... 5/10

overall i thought you couldav came harder u had a dcent bar buts thats all u had... you need to stay consistant in your battles other than that everything else was ight... 18/30

v/ MaD_KnighT... having a more solid verse, better strucutre and better punches.... stay up pz.

Voted For: MaD_KnighT

Verbal

Mad hails from the West, so I slap him in the east direction...
Cuz his pussy flows couldn't be sick if they developed a yeast infection..
^hehe, nice opener

Mad Knight? Yeah right..........this clown's a Jester, it's settled..
I'll rip up this fag's heart faster than high cholesterol levels...
^coo wordplay in second line, no punch though

Rapping's not your thing.....drop the mic and quit fakin...
Cuz you're an underground rapper....in terms of elevation..
^okaycloser

Good verse, your opener was straight fire but too bad you couldn't keep it up at that pace. The second bar was some nice wordplay and stuff but there was no real punch in my opinion. Closer was good, especially the last line but it lacked creativity. As far as vocab, structure and flow are concerned...I can't give any comments on that but what wins battles are personals and hardhitting punches and I only found that in your opener.


MaD KnighT

Fuck me we all know dat ur rhymes are so unstable......
Now its time 2 break ur legs in 2 and turn da table.......
^decent opener but no punch

To break me is in-possible you wasting lifes pure n simple breath.....
Cuz meta's get sent to ya sooner than kids getting into oy chest!...
^good wordplay and a punch in second line
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You suck on the mic, maybe literally coz we all no u suck dick.......
Get fucked quick cuz uve been in this prediciment once, give up kid
^nice closer

Also a good verse, unlike Verbal your opener was kinda weak but you picked up the pace towards the ending. Second bar had some nice vocab, good wordplay which you worked out into a hardhitting punch (second line). The last bar wasn't overely creative with the suck dick part but I feel you also hit him hard with this punch. No personalsthough but neither one of you had those. Vocab was good, some multis in there which improved your flow. Structure was good as well.

In the end my vote goes to MaD KnighT because I feel he was a bit more consistent with the punches even though you both can work on that, if you only do 6 lines people expect them to all be hardhitting and straight fire. Get that better nex time, no hate btw, just here to help...

Voted For: MaD_KnighT

this was a ok battle both didn't really come that hard that i saw...but i think mad knight won this cuz he had more TRYED and creative lines.....also verbal came harder wit the personals by far...but the opener and closer of mad knight took up for that...so my vote goes to mad knight.....V/mad knight

Fanx uppin for 1 more vote plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!