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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...t=187935&page=4

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2125506

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/w...olume1music.htm

^^ heres the link to this track so yall can go ahead and peep and leave feedback and i'll return the favor iight 1ne..

jea you should me this b4, i liked it
beat is kinda getting boring only cuz i heard alot of diff ppl on it b4
But you did have a good flow and you lyrics were str8
I liked your delevery on the beat.
of course good quality and all dat
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yeah you told me..but thx for the feedback again n e ways..lol iight son 1ne..uppinnn

Delivery was ok, sounds liek you got spit in ya mouth when you spit...lyrics is good,,,,punches are decent...delivery is nice....

Damn you spit long as fuck..I was expecting a chorus sometime in the song

aight. i know u kill it sens. so lets peep. wow. jada beat i love this beat where u get it at? clap like an aplause. wow u killin it with tha multis. put it in ya mouth like flossin. flow is flames rite here. wow. one of ur better joints def. horsin around like stables. ur shyt sounds professional. how long u been rappin son? u sound like u got some experiance. u use "like" in alot of ur lines. nuffin wrong widdit tho. u start flowin fast at this one part. i like that u can switch it up. u spittin tha truth. i dunno how old u r. lol o shit killin it widda accapella. pumpkin seeds line was coo. all in all, usualy wen i peep ur songs all tha lines i can predict. tha next bar is gonna have to do with a gun. but this one u def kept me interested. good shyt son. u been tryin sum new shyt i see. def on toppa tha game dunno y u gettin slept on tho. o yea. im doin a mixtape rite now n i gotta few more guest spots to fill it would be cool if u could come thru widdit. get at me tho! keep droppin this fire. i see u gettin known ferreal u pretty orriginal vooice too.... sheeeaaaa

i just realized this thread has 45 veiws n 5 replies. lol aint that a bytch peeps gon listen to ya shyt n then not leave feed. fvck it! so ur not bein slept on ppl are just too l azy to write back i guess lol. sheeeeeaaaaatttt

aiiiight. My boy! Sens always bringin it hard. Feelin this mos def. Lyrics is crazy. Cats sleep man. You always got dope flow, but not just flow, you got multi's and lyrics. Not many cats are bringin it in all areas. We gotta drop one more colab before we both quit postin yo. Holla at me. 1

chea n get at me too if u need an extra person to fill in that 3rd verse. lol throw it on my mixtape n viola!!! lol jp but if u guys down get at me!

feelin this for real...... ur actually first ive heard on this beat on this or any other site so it wasnt played to me..... real nice lyrics and good presence, flow...... u rap for a hella long time with no hook, but its a mixtape track so thats cool, and u dont need one if thats wat its for.... u def. on another level of skill compared to 90% of RV audio... pc

you showed me this when you first did it so ill post here good flow dope lyrics beats been being used alot in the game this is good much better then the original you did dope track all around here

thx all for the feedback and about collabs imma get at yall on sundays or some shit cuz i work like crazy and pretty soon im headin up to Ny to shop for a deal na'mean so wish me luck....

P.s. what label do yall think i might fit into well? just curious to see what yall might think..1ne..

looking for best song of the week.

listening:

Beat is very nice.. lol.. its like a old style tech and new style hip hop beat put together..

quality is nice just as always..

Flow is very good.. and lyrics are pretty good.. man im luvin this beat man.. very good..

chorus: its good.. but not really catchy you know?? but very good multi's if its the chorus lol..

man iono wut the chorus is lol.. but just good lyrics and song overall..

8/10