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AutoMatik vs Verbal
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10-16Linez No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 05-03-05 at 02:46 PM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. |
Verbal has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-02-05 02:46 PM.
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AutoMatik has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-02-05 02:49 PM.
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I feel like I'm roughing up a retard, sparring with you...
Kid, you couldn't spit heat at a Mongolian barbeque... Trust me, your frees are ugly and your rhymes can't bust me.. Cuz the verses you spit are full of shit, like Huggies.. I doubt you own a gun, but I'm sure that you've 'packed shit' So I'll cut out this fag's tongue and give him a new accent.. You're clumsy with weaponry, so don't talk about automatics.. Because I'll shoot up your crib like baby heroin addicts... I'll stay silent and still merk you...and let the weapons talk for me... Stick an 'L' in your bloody corpse and leave you with a sense of 'gLory'* *gory + L |
Im Smashin This Ass, Torchin Your Names Bashin You Fast......
Nd I'll Take Your 'Shots' With 'Vodka' As If I Was 'Brakin The Glass...... Aint Stop When I Blast, Ready To Die Soldier Theif This Win Like Someone Stole Her..... Nd He Wouldnt Be Able To 'Katch Up' Even If I Put You On My Burger..... Step In The Ring IM Like Werd Herb, Then Destroy Your Spinal Cowrd..... Nd Leave Your Chest With A Wider Hole, Then I'll 'Pop Shells, Like Sick Kids With 'Tylonal...... You Aint 'Standin A Chance' To Win Geek, Like 'I Cut Of Your Legs...... Nd Your Rhymes Weak, Beat Me? Nah, Cus Hes Bragin Over A '3 Battle Win Streak?...... |
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Voted For: AutoMatik
Verbal I feel like I'm roughing up a retard, sparring with you... Kid, you couldn't spit heat at a Mongolian barbeque... ^good opener Trust me, your frees are ugly and your rhymes can't bust me.. Cuz the verses you spit are full of shit, like Huggies.. ^bit played but decent I doubt you own a gun, but I'm sure that you've 'packed shit' So I'll cut out this fag's tongue and give him a new accent.. ^hehe good one You're clumsy with weaponry, so don't talk about automatics.. Because I'll shoot up your crib like baby heroin addicts... ^coo coo I'll stay silent and still merk you...and let the weapons talk for me... Stick an 'L' in your bloody corpse and leave you with a sense of 'gLory'* ^nice closer Good verse right here, nice potential in here with funny wordplay, some hardhitting punches, one personal too. Some self-glorification here and there though and you could have been more creative but I have seen far worse, you got some mad potential. Had your flow, vocab and structure on lock. Keep it up! AutoMatik Im Smashin This Ass, Torchin Your Names Bashin You Fast...... Nd I'll Take Your 'Shots' With 'Vodka' As If I Was 'Brakin The Glass...... ^nice wordplay right here, good opener Aint Stop When I Blast, Ready To Die Soldier Theif This Win Like Someone Stole Her..... Nd He Wouldnt Be Able To 'Katch Up' Even If I Put You On My Burger..... ^hehe, cool punch with dope wordplay again Step In The Ring IM Like Werd Herb, Then Destroy Your Spinal Cowrd..... Nd Leave Your Chest With A Wider Hole, Then I'll 'Pop Shells, Like Sick Kids With 'Tylonal...... ^hehe, funny bar You Aint 'Standin A Chance' To Win Geek, Like 'I Cut Of Your Legs...... Nd Your Rhymes Weak, Beat Me? Nah, Cus Hes Bragin Over A '3 Battle Win Streak?...... ^nice closer Nice verse, got a dope flow in this one due to the good ass multis you using. Strongest aspect in my opinion was your wordplay which you used to build up and work out some funny hardhitting punches, no real personals though but you made up for that. Structure and vocab was good as well. My vote goes to AutoMatik because I am really feeling his wordplay and the way he turned it into nice punches, no hate whatsoever to Verbal because you got more potential than half of these new kids man, keep it up for real! |
Voted For: AutoMatik
This is the deal Auomatik Im Smashin This Ass, Torchin Your Names Bashin You Fast...... Nd I'll Take Your 'Shots' With 'Vodka' As If I Was 'Brakin The Glass That Was Aii ....I Think The wordplay was used wrong in the bar Aint Stop When I Blast, Ready To Die Soldier Theif This Win Like Someone Stole Her..... Nd He Wouldnt Be Able To 'Katch Up' Even If I Put You On My Burger..... Sort of Played Meta But Still Nice Step In The Ring IM Like Werd Herb, Then Destroy Your Spinal Cowrd..... Nd Leave Your Chest With A Wider Hole, Then I'll 'Pop Shells, Like Sick Kids With 'Tylonal...... That Was Good You Aint 'Standin A Chance' To Win Geek, Like 'I Cut Of Your Legs...... Nd Your Rhymes Weak, Beat Me? Nah, Cus Hes Bragin Over A '3 Battle Win Streak?...... :roll: Three battle win streak?......damn Overall Man You did aii Overall but then at the end you hit em up with the last bar and it made me laugh big time and it was a really good personal verbal I feel like I'm roughing up a retard, sparring with you... Kid, you couldn't spit heat at a Mongolian barbeque... Umm ....... Aii Trust me, your frees are ugly and your rhymes can't bust me.. Cuz the verses you spit are full of shit, like Huggies.. Aii The second bar was hot But The 1st line? Your frees? wats that I doubt you own a gun, but I'm sure that you've 'packed shit' So I'll cut out this fag's tongue and give him a new accent.. Um... AIii You're clumsy with weaponry, so don't talk about automatics.. Because I'll shoot up your crib like baby heroin addicts... LOL :roll: I'll stay silent and still merk you...and let the weapons talk for me... Stick an 'L' in your bloody corpse and leave you with a sense of 'gLory'* Nice Overall Aii overall This battle was a really good battle you guys are evenly matched Really Good Battle this is a hard decision But ima have to go with Automatik [u]Can You RTF in The link IN My Battle Please |
RTF gIn The link In My SIg Please ....................Both Of you
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Voted For: Verbal
yo verbal got this one better structure Automatik i dont like ur structure its lookin real bad so brush up on that Verbal u had a nice flow & tight personals so i gotta give it to u Autmatik ur flow was weak2 go along with alrgith personals but i gotta give this basicly to verbal doin ya thang ~1~ RTF Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Verbal
I felt verbal took it by a hair...heres tha break down! structure-verbal(I doubt you own a gun, but I'm sure that you've 'packed shit' So I'll cut out this fag's tongue and give him a new accent..) wordplay-Automatic(Im Smashin This Ass, Torchin Your Names Bashin You Fast...... Nd I'll Take Your 'Shots' With 'Vodka' As If I Was 'Brakin The Glass......) punchlines-verbal(You're clumsy with weaponry, so don't talk about automatics.. Because I'll shoot up your crib like baby heroin addicts...) personals-Automatic(Nd Your Rhymes Weak, Beat Me? Nah, Cus Hes Bragin Over A '3 Battle Win Streak?......) but overall:...Verbal..he got more punches to connect.. Auto..You had some good multi's but lacked in good punches..thats it. Really this battle was nice..keep elevatin!! Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: AutoMatik
AUTOMATIK Im Smashin This Ass, Torchin Your Names Bashin You Fast...... Nd I'll Take Your 'Shots' With 'Vodka' As If I Was 'Brakin The Glass...... ^^^DECENT OPENER Aint Stop When I Blast, Ready To Die Soldier Theif This Win Like Someone Stole Her..... Nd He Wouldnt Be Able To 'Katch Up' Even If I Put You On My Burger..... ^^^LOL MADE ME LAUGH GOOD 1 Step In The Ring IM Like Werd Herb, Then Destroy Your Spinal Cord..... Nd Leave Your Chest With A Wider Hole, Then I'll 'Pop Shells, Like Sick Kids With 'Tylonal...... ^^^NICE LINE You Aint 'Standin A Chance' To Win Geek, Like 'I Cut Of Your Legs...... Nd Your Rhymes Weak, Beat Me? Nah, Cus Hes Bragin Over A '3 Battle Win Streak?...... ^^^IIGHT CLOSURE OVERALL I LIKED UR VERSE. THERE WUZ LOTZ OF NICE PUNCHES AND PERSONALS IN DERE. UR STRUCTURE WUZ GOOD N U R ELEVATIN GREAT. KEEP UP DA GOOD WORK HOMIE GREAT VERSE 4 A NEWB FAV LINE: "Aint Stop When I Blast, Ready To Die Soldier Theif This Win Like Someone Stole Her..... Nd He Wouldnt Be Able To 'Katch Up' Even If I Put You On My Burger..... " 8/10 VERBAL I feel like I'm roughing up a retard, sparring with you... Kid, you couldn't spit heat at a Mongolian barbeque... ^^^GREAT OPENER Trust me, your frees are ugly and your rhymes can't bust me.. Cuz the verses you spit are full of shit, like Huggies.. ^^^SHIT LINES.....PLAYED I doubt you own a gun, but I'm sure that you've 'packed shit' So I'll cut out this fag's tongue and give him a new accent.. ^^^NICE LINE You're clumsy with weaponry, so don't talk about automatics.. Because I'll shoot up your crib like baby heroin addicts... ^^^HA HA GOOD LINE MADE ME LAUGH I'll stay silent and still merk you...and let the weapons talk for me... Stick an 'L' in your bloody corpse and leave you with a sense of 'gLory'* ^^^MEH IIGHT CLOSURE THIS WUZ A CLOSE ASS BATTLE TO CALL VERBAL- I LIKED UR VERSE ALOT TOO.THERE WERE LOTZ OF PUNCHES AND PERSONALS HIT HARD. U HAD A NICE STRUCTURE AS WELL. U R GETTIN MUCH BETTA HOMIE.I LIKE UR WORK. KEEP ELEVATIN U R DOIN MUCH BETTA FAV LINE:"You're clumsy with weaponry, so don't talk about automatics.. Because I'll shoot up your crib like baby heroin addicts..." 7.5/10 NO HATE JUS VOTIN LIKE I SAID B4 GOOD ASS BATTLE B/W BOF YALL BUT MAH VOTE GON HAVE 2 GO 2 .........................AUTOMATIK STAY UP YALL N KEEP ELEVATIN ..............1 |
lol at them dick riding...lol......i'm not worried...i won...lol...
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