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(battle of a soul)
Adrenaline= blue
Death= Red he wakes up one morning and goes to use the bathroom,but doesn't see his reflection,rather a reflection of death...they start to battle for his soul... "Adrenaline's" about to face a death "rush",head crushed have his thoughts "inkin" red like bursts from "lead busts" A-D shocks whole flocks,traps top flow's in headlocks give death some "heart burn" wit more "holes" than tef's got death is "colder" than the ice age,ur body will get frozen "blues" I'll have ya "soul" trapped in more hole gaps than stolen "shoes" I cause a harder "system crash" than "computer viruses" leave dis victim slashed and "crossed" like "bones on pirates" is I "own more lives" than "slavery",death's face u'll hate to see and if ur life is a "dream" then that means u "wake" to me Im a feelin u just cant stop,the rush will have u "rocked" it's like gettin "stone-dashed" by folks who chasin cops it's a fact "death kills",anything he touches "fades to black" death's spits is like "mouth disease" cuz it's a "race of plaque" it's clear I aint afraid of "death", im prone from bein "tragic" that's why people "hate my rush",I got my own "hours in traffic" Death'll put u to bed like the "sandman" except "sleepin" is forever that means I "keep adrenaline",but do I "feel the rush"?...Never Stop "recyclin" ur wackness,ur whole speech is "repetitive" death is only "cold" cuz I keep the thought as mind "beverages" well if you keep "death in your mind" then u must be "brain dead" u never had a "chance" against me,it's "luck" ur still stayin as said so if im still "standin here" then it proves u'll never be "rid of me" I told u Im a feelin u "cant stop", hence the adrenaline "epitome" death will be baaaack!! and I will have you!!! please, i'll never leave I enjoy life,but thank you... death fades away...adrenaline see's his reflection...starts brushing his teeth...end's smiling... |
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dis was hot...8/10...very good flow/structure...return tha fava...first link in sig
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This was a pretty dope drop.. One of the best ive seen from
you adrenaline , i liked the comparision's you put in your drop You had nice emotions , good feeling, some nice vocab I felt you could have choose your worden alittle bettter. not have been some simple Your structure was good , like how you were fighten death.. Best line of the drop i would have to say was: "own more lives" than "slavery",death's face u'll hate to see and if ur life is a "dream" then that means u "wake" to me Im a feelin u just cant stop,the rush will have u "rocked" it's like gettin "stone-dashed" by folks who chasin cops nice this was a good bar...i was really feeling it ... Overall good drop ... keep it up , and i hope to see some more from you |
thanks uppin....
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that was fire man nice vocab good punches good flow and it was decent all around nice read and good drop fam 8/10
check-out my open mic that im gonna drop soon |
uppin...we can do better here...drop more feed please..favors will be returned
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