1st abstract- need feed
 

Need feedback on dis





my first abstract sig
wut do ya'll think of it

need feedback

i made dis 1 4 mah otha name on rapbattles
how yall like it

im not feelin this to much son..i aint even gonna lie...it looks sloppy.the text is real choppy...and the stroke doesnt go so well...the pic..isnt to good...edges r choppy...and the quality is bad..and ya text work can use alot more work...