.:Jack Rackam:. vs Intellect
 

Battle Rules:

10 - Lines, like you requested in your callout
No Crew Votes.dont have a crew
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 05-03-05 at 12:31 AM

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Intellect has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-02-05 11:42 PM.

.:Jack Rackam:. has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-02-05 11:48 PM.

Your text’s outlandish ? …….So let me understand this
Becuz you put a few words together,
………………………..you think you on a roll like a sandwich?
you drop, please i laugh at this,. it aint a hassle to bash this kid
mash ya steps and vanquish hits, … cuz hes a fuckin paci-FIST
the task aint mental, its like movin pyrimids," seperatin ya temples"
ya grills a rental...really ask the dentist... ya birth was ask-a-dental
leave you with pains and scars, its true your names lame by-far
and same wit bars, cuz i wont let a-ladd-in like my name was jafar
don’t mention you more, with intention of gore ill rip this whore
cuz intellect couldn’t turn the tables
…………………….If he was funkmaster flex in a furniture store!
.
keyed...good luck..

aint gotta be a baseball junkie to know ya average mark..
but we've seen ya home runs... along the trailor park.
face it bitch.. ya rhymes is old school .. stuck in '01 ..
no one feelin ya 5 year old shit .. 'cept for micheal jackson..
queer ass bitch, finally aint gunna get a handed win ..
& since its back to square one, we all payin attention to u again.
havin fun again.. your identity speaks for itself cus..
on ya way to the top? shit, now thats Jacked up.
you's an ugly nigga g .. and i'm only being bleak..
cus before you entered this .. it was a good lookin league.

good battle,....jacksons<played thou...lol, sa'll good

Voted For: .:Jack Rackam:.

multis are crazy ..punches are good and not played. your closur is dope as fuck.. almost inspired me to go text!

^^intell that vote wont count
it was meant to be feedback,......n/p

Voted For: .:Jack Rackam:.

in tellect good open and structure vocab is ok probally if after your good opener your punches got wack as fuck horrible wack and that hurt you badly here and made your verse weak you also had barely any personals at all one name play which was garbage weak drop anyways......
jack not the greatest verse but decent punches the whole way through here good flow structure a lil streched in places though but still good shit no personals which couldve made you lose cuz punches with personals will win everytime but you aint need um here good drop your far vastly superior punches got you this...............

Voted For: .:Jack Rackam:.

easy here, jack jus came a lot harder with punches..

best was:
don’t mention you more, with intention of gore ill rip this whore
cuz intellect couldn’t turn the tables
…………………….If he was funkmaster flex in a furniture store!

that killed his whole verse really.
nice drop.


Int your shit was nice too but wasnt up to the standard of his punches..
You also used played concept....(MJ bar). thats what lost you this...no hate!!

uppin 4 more votes....ive returned those ones^^^^^

Voted For: .:Jack Rackam:.

Jack Rackam verse

Your text’s outlandish ? …….So let me understand this
Becuz you put a few words together,
………………………..you think you on a roll like a sandwich?
^ Nice opener good punch

you drop, please i laugh at this,. it aint a hassle to bash this kid
mash ya steps and vanquish hits, … cuz hes a fuckin paci-FIST
^ lol good bar like the paci-fist bit

the task aint mental, its like movin pyrimids," seperatin ya temples"
ya grills a rental...really ask the dentist... ya birth was ask-a-dental
^ lol decent wordplay good bar

leave you with pains and scars, its true your names lame by-far
and same wit bars, cuz i wont let a-ladd-in like my name was jafar
^ lol good bar my boy loves Aladdin lol

don’t mention you more, with intention of gore ill rip this whore
cuz intellect couldn’t turn the tables
…………………….If he was funkmaster flex in a furniture store!
^ lol decent closer

Overall
Decent 5 bars nice flow don't feel the 3 line thing but they were good bars anyway so i kinda ignored it on this occasion flow was good overall nice verse

Intellect

aint gotta be a baseball junkie to know ya average mark..
but we've seen ya home runs... along the trailor park.
^ opener ain't strong coulda been better

face it bitch.. ya rhymes is old school .. stuck in '01 ..
no one feelin ya 5 year old shit .. 'cept for micheal jackson..
^ Played

queer ass bitch, finally aint gunna get a handed win ..
& since its back to square one, we all payin attention to u again.
^ win & again = weak rhyme

havin fun again.. your identity speaks for itself cus..
on ya way to the top? shit, now thats Jacked up.
^ flip on name but wording coulda been better

you's an ugly nigga g .. and i'm only being bleak..
cus before you entered this .. it was a good lookin league.
^ closer aight personal but n word really ain't needed

Overall
Verse coulda been better nice flow and struc but i think thats all it won it on really Jack gets my vote for stronger punches and personals

RTF in my sig...3 days to RTF or vote removed

Voted For: .:Jack Rackam:.

Jack:
Your text’s outlandish ? …….So let me understand this
Becuz you put a few words together,
………………………..you think you on a roll like a sandwich?
ok, word better, 6/10
you drop, please i laugh at this,. it aint a hassle to bash this kid
mash ya steps and vanquish hits, … cuz hes a fuckin paci-FIST
coo wordplay, mmm I found it lacked though 5/10
the task aint mental, its like movin pyrimids," seperatin ya temples"
ya grills a rental...really ask the dentist... ya birth was ask-a-dental
ohhh snap, best bar 10/10
leave you with pains and scars, its true your names lame by-far
and same wit bars, cuz i wont let a-ladd-in like my name was jafar
good wordplay, punch lacked, 5/10
don’t mention you more, with intention of gore ill rip this whore
cuz intellect couldn’t turn the tables
…………………….If he was funkmaster flex in a furniture store!
lol dope, 8/10
34/50

Intellect:
aint gotta be a baseball junkie to know ya average mark..
but we've seen ya home runs... along the trailor park.
ohohohoho, that was nice. 9/10
face it bitch.. ya rhymes is old school .. stuck in '01 ..
no one feelin ya 5 year old shit .. 'cept for micheal jackson..
no punch, played, sry very bad, 0/10
queer ass bitch, finally aint gunna get a handed win ..
& since its back to square one, we all payin attention to u again.
ahaha, you must be an alias, dope bar, 7/10
havin fun again.. your identity speaks for itself cus..
on ya way to the top? shit, now thats Jacked up.
I get it, but I didnt like it 2/10
you's an ugly nigga g .. and i'm only being bleak..
cus before you entered this .. it was a good lookin league.
blah, not that good, 4/10

22/50