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H-N-I-C 05-03-05 09:21 PM

First Poem
 
This is really a spoken word type poem, but it reads o.k.


Love Me

I don’t wanna have sex, that’s just so passé
I must say I’d rather lay up and make love all day
U see…sex is an impulse action executed for ya satisfaction
With only a fraction of the feelings u exert when making love

I want you to Love Me

See…I wanna make love to you in a way you couldn’t handle
On a bed of rose petals surrounded by scented candles
Massage oils on ya back so I can rub you the right way
One hand over ya mouth, cuz there’s no telling what you might say

I want you to Love Me
You utter faint screams of pleasure as I penetrate ya walls
Missionary no dog at this time
Just a pelvic grind, push and thrust…a must, when we make love
Because…your sexy smile excites my libido…causes me to go
Crazy…dazing as I think about the climatic peaks we’ve experienced
I’m taken to a wonderful place of bliss and ecstasy
With you next to me…exciting my mind, body and soul
Arousing me until I lose control
Flashbacks of muffled moans entice my coclea
Givin me eargasms as I give you orgasms, back spasms
Causin your body to erupt with passion and scream….......Love Me

Macca 05-03-05 09:27 PM

omg. This is wierd. Stupid topic but the good thing is that you explained very well. good job.

H-N-I-C 05-04-05 11:49 AM

Uhhh...thanx....uppin 4 feed

Detrimental 05-04-05 02:01 PM

this was decent....interesting topic....explained well but try pickin another topic besides sex lol....it'll catch readers interest more....but overall this was some good shit
return the favor on my poekm called Heaven

H-N-I-C 05-04-05 08:19 PM

Preciate tha feed, I'll try and write about a broader topic next time

Lyrical Prodigy 05-05-05 06:35 PM

lol...this wuz uh....unique...like da otha guy said....u explained it well but do get anotha topic next time


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