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::..:$lobK::..: vs Solo
Battle Rules:
10-Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting THE JURY VS ILLUNITCS G-LUCK Minimum posts to vote: 250 Check in by: 05-05-05 at 09:44 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
Solo has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-04-05 12:57 PM.
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Put foot to ass have ya feelin the boot like ya journey in the RV tourney…* Leave ya crippled with them stretched lines..sumone fetch me a gurney…** It’s the everlasting truth that even the shit on my shoe is suprassing you… Jury claim to be the illest crew, but ya siggy shows that ya just passin thru…*** Inevitable for you to choke like a B-Rabbit..its the turtle that wins the race… But if ya do believe in miracles..maybe sum day The Jury will win a case… Solo still runs the courtroom..ya crew name derived from sumone skilled…**** Owned by a self-g line..I’m a hitman who been paid $ to have lob Killed… Ya lack creativity..ya verses are all flat cuz ya spit 2-dimensional rhymes… Confused? This retard needs special-ed so allow me to explain sum lines… * Was the first person to be eliminated from the KORV2 :laugh: ** he drops stretched lines, a gurney is a metal stretcher (stretched/stretcher) wordplay!!! *** says illest crew on RV in his sig and it is scrollin across the screen **** one of my old names was Judge & Jury and don't say shit about me explainin my lines cuz that last bar gives me the right to cuz its part of the effect of the punch!!! |
::..:$lobK::..: has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-05-05 12:28 AM.
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Dis Herb Losin To "Queens" Niggas..Dats Y He Took Da "King" Out His Name Yo * C'mon Man..U A Vet And Not In Da Top Ten? U Could Onli B Ranked But So-Low (Solo) U A Herb Child..This Illunitic Is Just "Spittin Cold"..Like "Eskimos Coughin" U Aint Liked..Just Judgin From Your Name I Could Tell That U Get The Finger Often Think U Got It Made? How U Solo And U Depend On Crews For Top Aide Imma Put This PUSSY On His Girl's HAIR..Now Dats Wat I Call BOX BRAIDS I Done Got U Beat..Solo Could Only Be "Light On His Feet" When "Battlin In Dark" C Dat U Pushed Off..Unless U Said Ur "Bars On Glass"..They'll Never "Look Sharp" When U Spit A Verse..Voters Is Like "Rape Victims"..Dey Beggin U To "Please Stop" U Not On Top..Imma Cut Open Ur Chest And Put Ur "Heart On A Pussy" To Form A "Beat Box" *- In My Opinion He Lost To MarvJay1009..Marv From Queens |
Voted For: Solo
Put foot to ass have ya feelin the boot like ya journey in the RV tourney…* Leave ya crippled with them stretched lines..sumone fetch me a gurney…** ^^nice opener, some decent multis..well semi multi's(werd-play) It’s the everlasting truth that even the shit on my shoe is suprassing you… Jury claim to be the illest crew, but ya siggy shows that ya just passin thru…*** ^^lol,.dope punch, crew personal Inevitable for you to choke like a B-Rabbit..its the turtle that wins the race… But if ya do believe in miracles..maybe sum day The Jury will win a case… ^^ok, kinda filler Solo still runs the courtroom..ya crew name derived from sumone skilled…**** Owned by a self-g line..I’m a hitman who been paid $ to have lob Killed… ^^good name play...good setup(boarderline selfglory thou) Ya lack creativity..ya verses are all flat cuz ya spit 2-dimensional rhymes… Confused? This retard needs special-ed so allow me to explain sum lines… ^^^this was the best punch in the entire verse... that was a dope way to incorporate explanations without pissing off the reader, awesome concept solo . Dis Herb Losin To "Queens" Niggas..Dats Y He Took Da "King" Out His Name Yo * C'mon Man..U A Vet And Not In Da Top Ten? U Could Onli B Ranked But So-Low (Solo) ^^played personal, flow was awful., to stretched U A Herb Child..This Illunitic Is Just "Spittin Cold"..Like "Eskimos Coughin" U Aint Liked..Just Judgin From Your Name I Could Tell That U Get The Finger Often ^^no creativity with your punch, set up was ok Think U Got It Made? How U Solo And U Depend On Crews For Top Aide Imma Put This PUSSY On His Girl's HAIR..Now Dats Wat I Call BOX BRAIDS ^^bow braids..? not feeling the punch, meta was ok, but no punch I Done Got U Beat..Solo Could Only Be "Light On His Feet" When "Battlin In Dark" C Dat U Pushed Off..Unless U Said Ur "Bars On Glass"..They'll Never "Look Sharp" ^^wow, stretched n lost flow badly, punch was weak n didnt make sense When U Spit A Verse..Voters Is Like "Rape Victims"..Dey Beggin U To "Please Stop" U Not On Top..Imma Cut Open Ur Chest And Put Ur "Heart On A Pussy" To Form A "Beat Box" ^^beat box?...its not a punch man, metas are ok in ya verse but you use them wrong, there not even punches, your flow is choppy n falls off on every bar, lines are stretched bad. wasnt feeling any of your concepts, n you had relatively no real personals on this cat.. . overall i gotta go with solo, he brought alot more creativity in his verse, n his delivery was better, n his closer was better then slobs entire verse in my opinion....... |
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Voted For: Solo
votin for solo ight solo u got dis by the ksin of ya teeth ya personals seemed a lil more creative to me them slob Solo Punches- creative n hard hittin personals- creative as werll nice job flow- on the dot was feelin it like mad multies- didnt see any strucutre nice strucutre Slob punches- nice n creative as well but at the end u came up short fam personals- ehhh were a lil basic wasnt feelin em multies- didnt see any flow- good flow i liked it strucutre- good strucutre it was easy to keep with ide like to see multies from both but solo edged this out wit them personals damn good battle fams close battle i t was hard to vote on be sure to RTF link below sig |
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y'all know how we do it..................fuckin uppin this bitch ass bizattle!!!!
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Voted For: Solo
Solo got this for hitting with a lot harder punches, personal and overall just being more creative.. slobk your shit was ok, but i seen the personals used on him too many times before so seemed to played for me. both had good vocab and punches but solo got this for just coming overall harder. |
Voted For: Solo
::..:$lobK::..: verse: Dis Herb Losin To "Queens" Niggas..Dats Y He Took Da "King" Out His Name Yo * C'mon Man..U A Vet And Not In Da Top Ten? U Could Onli B Ranked But So-Low (Solo) I can't like this line, because I just read a KORV battle with solo, and this is played, and alot of other people said this also. U A Herb Child..This Illunitic Is Just "Spittin Cold"..Like "Eskimos Coughin" U Aint Liked..Just Judgin From Your Name I Could Tell That U Get The Finger Often Same thing, I couldnt feel this line because it's not my first time seeing it Think U Got It Made? How U Solo And U Depend On Crews For Top Aide Imma Put This PUSSY On His Girl's HAIR..Now Dats Wat I Call BOX BRAIDS Not that hard hitting to me. I think this one couldve been wayy better Done Got U Beat..Solo Could Only Be "Light On His Feet" When "Battlin In Dark" C Dat U Pushed Off..Unless U Said Ur "Bars On Glass"..They'll Never "Look Sharp" Didnt make the most of since... When U Spit A Verse..Voters Is Like "Rape Victims"..Dey Beggin U To "Please Stop" U Not On Top..Imma Cut Open Ur Chest And Put Ur "Heart On A Pussy" To Form A "Beat Box" Stretched, but by far your hardest line. Nice closer This was a really slow lacking verse in my opinion. It seemed like every attempt at a punch/personal has been said already and takes alot of points away. I wasn't too much feeling this verse, although, excluding your last bar, you had good flow and structure to your verse. I can't give you my vote simply because you lacked creativitie in my opinion Solo's verse Put foot to ass have ya feelin the boot like ya journey in the RV tourney…* Leave ya crippled with them stretched lines..sumone fetch me a gurney…** Yea, this had nice wordplay in it. Nice opener, nice punchline It’s the everlasting truth that even the shit on my shoe is suprassing you… Jury claim to be the illest crew, but ya siggy shows that ya just passin thru…*** Dope personal. Nice punch, and all that. This was creative Inevitable for you to choke like a B-Rabbit..its the turtle that wins the race… But if ya do believe in miracles..maybe sum day The Jury will win a case… Not that hard hitting of a punchline, but just ight for me. Solo still runs the courtroom..ya crew name derived from sumone skilled…**** Owned by a self-g line..I’m a hitman who been paid $ to have lob Killed… This couldve been better. I think you tried wayy too hard to play off his name Ya lack creativity..ya verses are all flat cuz ya spit 2-dimensional rhymes… Confused? This retard needs special-ed so allow me to explain sum lines… Nice closer, but not a hard hitting punch You came out prepared from the start it looked like, and I can see you were creative. You had some good punchline personals that gave you major points in this battle. Your verse flowed well, and I think you improved majorly in wordplay. I gave you my vote because I felt you came more original in this one, and you had harder punches. Not a big suprising battle, but just a win for you. I think your closer was dope, and it went well with your explainations which also gave you alot of point. Solo gets my vote. Please RTF on battle link in the bottom of sig please. ~1~ |
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