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..........,,,:"'' .. ..RV'S run down.....p1
Rv run down….. . We all know there’s cheaters, leaders, and RV back-seaters With stacks of feeders witch are crap like the wack cheaters, Leaders like the cheaters cuz they stab back at other leaders But feeders stack heaters and stab back at the wack cheaters The cheaters clap back caught or wack and beef back-feeders That leaves back-seaters to stack heaters n clap wack cheaters Now attackin cheaters: is feeders, seaters and backed leaders feeders crack to cheaters n that reflects back on backed leaders cheaters are now beef eaters n set tracks to attack back-seaters back-seaters clap back and snap wack cheaters with black reefa backed leaders quick to trap credit like he’s wacked da cheetah now backseaters crack wit facts, seaters’ll turn leaders into bleeders seaters stack attacks at cheaters cuz they wack like their wack leaders …who got wacked neither, I hadta step outside for a breatha part 2 comin soon.... |
links
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=189165 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...455#post2128455 . leave feedback and ill RTF, make sure you understand this piece thou...lol |
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holy shit!!!
try sayin that verse fast...........LMAO!!!! that shit was dope though............fuck it if anyone says ya vocab or shit was basic...the multies in that were crazy, the hottest use of multies i seen on RV and the flow was dope as hell i didnt even have to stop for breath, i went through the entire thing straight off...............a dope drop and i just hope ya part 2 matches up to the high standard ya set ya self....................... OVERALL: 9.5/10 almost..........but nuthin's perfect!!!! :thumbup: RTF!!! on my RV House Party shit!!!! |
lol, word,.....i will....thanx for the feed faM
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wtf................ima read this later. I know there gotta be a point to it...I kinda started understandin it near tha end, but im bout to go...ima set this as a favorite and come back to it...lol
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hmm, well its nice to see ALL these posts with feedback
really makes me think some1 reads my shit...lol..... |
Ya I get the point, and like how it was done, it's hard to write a verse that style, but you made it work, and ugh, it was creative and original so big ups to that, not perfect, coulda been flawless, and a ten, coulda made this insanely dope, but it did stay solid and was good, 8.7354620918/10
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Hurt my brain tryna figure out what was goin on...
Very tight verse tho homie... And so true in more ways than one... Cant wait for part 2. |
this was nice, the lines were true down to the core, tried to confuse some folks but it's not meant for everyone to understand lol.. just messing, but yeah nice multis lol @ stopping to take a breather, i thought this was quite creative to do especially as a reflection of people on rv, can start beef if people figure out who they are outta the list lol.. nice shit keep up ya work, man.. :thumbup:
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^^your A Smart One Girl Ill Give You That
And All Will Be Revealed In Part 2, True Fact.. |
yeah playa ya shit was dope
drop the 2nd one soon |
The Funny Thing Is, Buy The Time You Posted This
I Finished Part 2............but Uppinthis... The Top 6 Om's On This Page Are Mine....lol... Going Out Like My Boi Deph |
nice shit...nothin much too say at tha time...in a rush...return tha fava on "gettin attention"...9/10 4real fam...1
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this was pretty sick man........full of multi's and the flow was crazt insane from it.....nice wordplay and i mean you coulda used more than the vocab you had.....but it kept it interesting i just kept readin to see howd u would tweak each line to mae t different....and it was really good.....definately dope....i think i have to go read the part 2 now.....lol......keep it up man this was a hot drop.....9.5/10
rtf open mic in sig |
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