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Big City 05-04-05 12:35 AM

Big City vs Lyricle Disciple
 
Battle Rules:

8 bars max
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 150

Check in by: 05-06-05 at 12:35 AM

Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in.

Big City 05-04-05 01:15 AM

are we still battlin or what?

System 05-04-05 01:40 AM

Lyricle Disciple has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-04-05 01:40 AM.

Trauma 05-04-05 01:42 AM


As Big As It Is His City Will Still Get Missed Like All Of-His-Votes
Couldn't Smell Defeat With Shoes Of And He He Followed-His-Nose
The Hollow-Is-So-Close,....That It'll Turn Him Into Soll-lid-Toast
This Model-Is-So-Close, Tho Feeling Spot Bottles-To-His-Throat
I'm Adam Your Eve, I Let You Eat First, Then Like Jo Jo Scream
And I'm Not Screaming Anything Bitch It's Get Out And LEAVE!!!!!
Your Chances Of Beating Me Is Like Your Chances, Of Dying Son!
But I'll Let You Get One Dick Riding Vote For Trying............One!!!!

System 05-04-05 02:45 PM

Big City has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-04-05 02:45 PM.

Big City 05-04-05 09:41 PM

After i kill this dude,... dog, ima make ya leave classs
squeeze fast,n watch this "lil sun/son" pass away like Steve Nash
give u bruises intact, jack, you losin this match
if you a disciple, than you must be the Juda's of rap
thats my candid opinion, slash ya face wit rancid incisions
while you fall on these bars like you landed in prison
City pop u at noon, hop in ya tomb wit rockets to boom
u can be a disciple of lyrics, but this battle im a prophet of doom
i cock neeners, lad, have ya mom's screamin mad
when i let the shank, scrub ya face like a Noxema pad
i know you schemin bad, thats the reason why i slump cats
the pump blasts, burn ya head off like a struck match
i cant decipher ya diction, cuz its compliant with fiction
your on a journey to a loss, and im assigning the mission
sit ya ass down, cuz the ruegers is long
only time somebody told u to "stand up" was a ludacris song...dog its nothin


*Judas was the disciple that betraid jesus

Trauma 05-04-05 09:44 PM

Oh Hell No You Ghetto Fool That's Mess Up In The Thread It Said 8 Lines Not 8 Bars Man

Big City 05-04-05 09:45 PM

^^^^^^^* STeve Nash is the point guard for the Phoenix suns in case anybody didnt know.
uppin this joint, lets get some votes on this ish

Trauma 05-04-05 09:49 PM

Read up Cuzz.............................................. .

Big City 05-05-05 10:06 AM

nah it def. says 8 bars clearly at the top

Big City 05-05-05 10:07 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Big City
Battle Rules:

[B]8 bars max[/B]<<<<
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 150

Check in by: 05-06-05 at 12:35 AM

Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in.


i mean it says it right there at the top, idk what u was readin

Ryan Hughes 05-05-05 05:17 PM

Voted For: Big City

Vote/BIg City....this was a good battle both came wit it but big got my vote he came wit good punchs an wordplay not that many personals but the punchs were saving u....Lyricle u had sum good punchs but some were played an some didnt make sense...but ur structure was good...work on ur punchs...
No Hate......RETURN THE FAVOR......
Opener=B
Closer=Tie
Structue=Tie
Punchs=B
Personals=tie
Wordplay=B
Multi's=Tie(not many)
Overall=Big City

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Big City 05-05-05 05:19 PM

lol my whole verse was multies, but thanks for the honest vote upppin for more

Trauma 05-05-05 08:23 PM

Fuck That Shit You DUmb If You Didn't Understand And How Was It Played? You Fucking Idiot

Big City 05-05-05 08:24 PM

uppin for more votes.................................


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