Song 1-12
 

Lil Something I just Put Together.. No Hate please.. Just looking for some constructive feed.. i ll RTTF....


Song is : 1-12






http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2129490

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2129501

well the only thing i liked of the song was the beat, the lyrics were hella wack,no hate but true,like the beat tho,nice quality,battle me hoe on audio

yo ur quality is almost studio damn............heavy quality

intro is okay...i aint feelin ur hook...the beat is dopeness...u start spittin, lyrically your decent nuttin original or specatcular but nuttin terrible..ur flow sound slike ur trin 2 hard to hit the snare at times..but its on beat 4 the mostpart...u need a hook those sfx dnt really pull it off homie..overall not that bad a track.....hit me up on AIM we cud do a remix cos im likin the beat...= Acuity2k5

RTF plz...on ma battle wid Mad Dog link in sig

ok intro......not bad beat honestly im not feelin your lyrics and flow.....yer voice is ok
better than yer other shit so far....**still listning**yeah i didnt really enjoy this not your worste but not that good

Word.. Thanks For the Feed.. Yah i couldnt come up Wit a Chours for it.. So i just Played around wit the Sfx's But word imma Hit you up....

no hate in that last post str8 feed...keep it up bro get yo flow down
u could be an alrite emcee

Word thanks for the Feed...........................

yeye no prob i liked shots at red bull and kesse it was simple but funny
loo thanx fer takin my dumbnes out yo sig to peace fam..........no more beef with u homie

yah.. the Beef is over.... Uppin.. For more Feedback...

................*ahem*.................

it was aiight some of ya lyrics i was questionin and others were good.....

Thx for the Feed.........................