CrazyDogg vs the metaphor
 

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Check in by: 05-04-05 at 06:28 PM

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CrazyDogg has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-04-05 05:28 PM.

the metaphor has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-04-05 05:31 PM.

Bitch thinks that.......um... I'm a newbie, but we neva met before....
This guys sick....and I don't mean in skill....it's just a metaphor....
He's gonna screw up this whole show....like country artists at da VMA's....
When I give this guy a 'fortune' cookie...is the only time he'll see 'change'...
Imma merk you kid you should just quit.....fuck it I might as well just erase ya...
Make ya ass leave RV quick....then we'll another herb will register and replace ya....
This guys got nearly 250 posts and still he calls out the noobies of RV....
Bitch with callouts like that.....I know that theres no way you can harm me....
Dogg....don't step to someone like me...cuz you can't and won't prevail....
Your title is actually the result of your penis.....on a weight scale!

you the biggest bitch on rv, repin avy's like feliux(the cat)
how the hell you suppose to be good,and ya wins is minus/
claiming people garbage,but whos really oscar the grouch/
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=187490 u just a fag,that like to take shots to the mouth/
catch you on block and the ak will spit,like chew/
your flows are shitty,thats proly why u doo doo/
you never was crazydogg you was just alittle fiesty/
you just a faggot ass cali boywho though he was nice g/
i know its tough on you every time you take an L/
but i'll split your brain anyway like,a fucken atoms cell/

lets get some votes if you dont understand dont vote

uppin dogg bring it on

Voted For: CrazyDogg

votin for crazy


Crazy got dis due to more harder punches n better personals

Crazy
punches- hard hittin n nice n creative
personals- creative n hard hittin as well, very nice
flow- good flow nice n on tune
strucutre lil chippy but i kept wit it
multies- didnt see any elevate on those

Metaphor
punches- hard hittin but a lil basic
personasl- not very good nuttin whas hard enough
flow- good flow
multies- didnt see any
strucutre nice strucutre

elevate on ya nulties n get some harder personals n punches

i was feelin crazy punches n personals more then metas

both elevate on multies fo sho


good battle fams


be sure to RTF
my batte link is below sig

Voted For: CrazyDogg

iight i think you got this because u had better strucutre the metaphore u shouldint of put that link like that remember this thing

Nigga please
that doesint mess up ur structure crazy dogg u had better punches u still neex to elavate ur flow was iight and try not to rhyme with the same word twice the metaphore ur flow was good overall elavate for real ur punches was weak

v/crazydogg
RTF in the sig close those old battles

Cmon yall uppin this

Voted For: CrazyDogg

mettas=crazy dogg
punches=crazy dogg
wordplay=neither
personals=crazy dogg
enjpyment=crazy dogg
creativity=crazy dogg

basically man crazies verse is better structured which makes his punches hit harder. Also his got better creativity and his punches made more sense, good work man. Metaphor you need to sort ya structure out n learn better punchlines, i mean ya hits weren't punches they were just rhymes. Check out my battle wit lyrical clarity, thats ma best battle so far so you'll get the picture. peace, o yea go vote on it.

uppin yall vote here cmon

uppin cmon vote y'all

Voted For: CrazyDogg

you the biggest bitch on rv, repin avy's like feliux(the cat)
how the hell you suppose to be good,and ya wins is minus/
weak opener
claiming people garbage,but whos really oscar the grouch/
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=187490 u just a fag,that like to take shots to the mouth/
below decent, punch
catch you on block and the ak will spit,like chew/
your flows are shitty,thats proly why u doo doo/
nah
you never was crazydogg you was just alittle fiesty/
you just a faggot ass cali boywho though he was nice g/
could’ve been harder
i know its tough on you every time you take an L/
but i'll split your brain anyway like,a fucken atoms cell/
decent

Overall: work on ur punches, make ur flow extend more &
add some personas in ur punches, but overall u need to elevate
some more metaphor


Bitch thinks that.......um... I'm a newbie, but we neva met before....
This guys sick....and I don't mean in skill....it's just a metaphor....
avg opener
He's gonna screw up this whole show....like country artists at da VMA's....
When I give this guy a 'fortune' cookie...is the only time he'll see 'change'...
nah, weak punch here
Imma merk you kid you should just quit.....fuck it I might as well just erase ya...
Make ya ass leave RV quick....then we'll another herb will register and replace ya....
repeated lines are kinda wack here
This guys got nearly 250 posts and still he calls out the noobies of RV....
Bitch with callouts like that.....I know that theres no way you can harm me....
decent punch
Dogg....don't step to someone like me...cuz you can't and won't prevail....
Your title is actually the result of your penis.....on a weight scale!
good closer

Overall: u had some decent punches here, the structure was a lil off
The flow was pretty decent & the vocab here was good, overall tho
Fix ur structure & come with harder punches next time.. but decent
Drop from you though…


RTF CrazyDogg

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Voted For: CrazyDogg

V/CrazyDogg....this was a ight battle...both came wit some good punchs an personals....but crazy came wit better non played punchs an good personals...an wordplay.....meta...u had sum played lines an not that good personals....u need to work on that.....No Hate....RETURN THE FAVOR....(OR U'LL NEVER RECIEVE AN HONEST VOTE FROM ME AGIAN)
Opener=C
CLoser=Tie
Structure=Tie
Punchs=C
Personals=C
Wordplay=C
Vocab=C
Multi's=tie(not many)
Overall=Crazydogg